please continue writing this story. it's really good

please update :)

Very interesting. I had sort of hoped that this would be following some type of serious canon type thing, but this is cool too.

This seems interesting. I can't help but wonder about the girl that Rito has a "stony relationship" with.

It better not be Lala.

Interesting. I'd like to see more!

Only the first chapter and already I am so fucking hooked to this!

Is this going to be a Harem fic? And I'm glad to see ya back you Fuck-Mothering Vampire!

You know, I love fics where you take a character that was previously awful in the cannon series and make them believably better,so you best bet that I will keep an eye on this one. Good work, keep it up.

*Tear roles down cheek* IT'S GREAT

I like the idea of this so far. Although I never finished the second season, I did like this anime a lot, so I look forward to this. I'll be watching for more.
Later

Well it's certainly very different from normal fics. I will be keeping an eye on this one.

nice, i never see this kind of tlr fanfic before

p/s: i like the "super xtreme woman grand tits" :lmao:

Well you certainly have my attention considering what Gid did with Rito. You hardly have any grammar mistakes and I like your style of writing so I look forward to reading more of this :)