Neva: "Snow"
Amalia: "Work of God"
Adye: "Crown, King, Royal".

Those are the name meanings!

Mm this is just the amount of angst I needed today. And oh! You are such a good writer, your wordings are fabulous. Thank you for this

God, I love this. I love Kenobi, and I love Neva. 3

You bet that I'm getting ready to re-read and love every word in this trilogy again very soon. Every time I think of Star Wars, I reminise of the days I fell for these masterpieces 3. So be ready for another blast of my reviews soon (After I watch the last movie).

Huh, this was pretty cool.

This was a great story too. I always love Obi Wan fics. I think hes my favorite character.

Your OC is very well developed that much is evident. I feel like I know her already and you're clearly a talented writer. The only criticism I have is the wordiness in the first chapter (I haven't read the rest yet). There is too much 'tell' and not enough 'show, ' and that can cause someone to lose interest rather quickly. I had to skim through most of it because I felt like I was getting a history lesson instead of reading a story. Sometimes the best way to inform readers is through dialogue, I know that can be challenging, but it's worth it in the end.

Moreover, I look forward to reading the rest of the story, and I'm still beating myself up over the fact that I JUST now discovered it.

Good luck!

Gee, that last part... It gave me goosebumps and made me tear up. Don't get me wrong, it was good, but man...

I really quite enjoyed your whole Lady Amalia story. Although there wasn't as much dialog compared to other stories, if flowed fairly well and was descriptive on many levels which I enjoyed. You're portrayal of the canon characters was spot on, especially Ben. I think it was a good start to the next story, which I am excited to read.

Thank you so much for spending your time, emotions, and energy into writing this story. It was written well, to which you have a talent. I'm happy I was able to read it :)

;; So bittersweet. That must have been so hard. I knew that assassination attempt would play out later in the story. Very good chapter, thank you :)

She proposed! Loved the reactions that caused X) This was quite a nice chapter, written well. Thank you so much! :3

Such a sad chapter... I think you portrayed all the feelings quite well. Good chapter, thank you :)

;; Poor Padme... And there was another kiss! Liking those tender kisses :3 Godd chapter, written well. Thank you :)

Ah, now let's hope they do meet up. No spoilers! Thank you for this well written chapter. Though the long paragraphs are somewhat tedious after a while. No worries, though. Your story is good, so I will continue reading :)

; ; So sad... You got the feelings between Neva and Ben so well done. I really don't have any criticism. Thank you for this chapter :)

Anakin, you meanie! You knew exactly what you were doing! Poor Neva :( Very good chapter, well written. Thank you :)