Reviews for Naruto in Capua |
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1jesus chapter 11 . 1/19 Can you do another Spartacus fanfic and pair the OC with Saxa, Lucretia, and Laete? It can start off in Gods of the Arena |
bloodline 69 chapter 1 . 1/22/2018 well written on the story man I appreciate it is a great story |
Haspu Bujog chapter 9 . 9/1/2017 This story is very well crafted. I liked it, and I think this story deserved more recognition, more followers and favorites. However, I do have some caveats about it. I miss a more dignified presence of Naruto and the changes that were to occur with his presence in Capua. I would also expect some POVs from Saxa, Crisus and Agron. I would like to see Naruto interacting with these characters. Ilithyia's presence is refreshing and I think soon she will make a move to be with Naruto, in addition to friendship. I liked the presence of the assassin's, but honestly I was disgusted with the presence of many Naruto characters and the canon connection between him and Sasuke, maybe this is one of the reasons people turn away from this good story. |
Guest chapter 2 . 7/19/2017 Make it a naruto/Saxa/besela/kore. Pairing |
Tacbon20 chapter 9 . 7/9/2017 Update please |
Guest chapter 10 . 7/1/2017 Good book continue the book Dcylo235 gmail .com |
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ulfark chapter 6 . 11/19/2016 ok i was waiting for you to diverge from the original story at some point but you have almost completely transcribed the dialogue of the show into your story. the only exception is when naruto is mentioned but then only to kill faceless legionaries or to steal a few lines from other characters. he has done nothing of note to change the outcome of anything. literally everything has happened the same way regardless of him being there. i have just watched the show so i recognize what others may have forgotten and am bored beyong measure at the pale reflection. if i want to hear those epic lines again i would rather watch the show again. i came here to read something new to temper my hunger for more spartacus not to eat regurgitated shit. |
Dipsyy chapter 11 . 10/10/2016 pair ilithyia with him |
Dragoncyber22 chapter 11 . 10/5/2016 A good story |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/30/2016 Update literally only good story you made |
godlikenaruto95 chapter 10 . 10/1/2016 Please start updating again soon |
Guest chapter 10 . 9/19/2016 Fucking update |
Guest chapter 4 . 5/28/2016 Hmmm, I read 4 out of 10 chapters and Naruto hasn't changed anything yet. Yes, he is a skilled assasin, but his spy doesn't report anything anymore and the same people as in canon die. So no difference, just canon with a extra person. But I shall read the last 6 chapters... probably... |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/28/2016 I like the idea of this crossover. Good first chapter. My only complain is that they have no chakra, but animal companions like slugs and foxes? Wtf? With chakra Naruto would be overkill, but without it he isn't the same. The companions don't fit in... but what was written is written. So no point in complaining now. |