Reviews for An Earlier Heaven |
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prominently late chapter 10 . 7/7 im uber disappointed there isn't more, but thats how it always is when I finish a book. never the less im glad you left the summary |
blackbox47 chapter 10 . 6/5 i feel so dumb lol what ending what also the apparent dress in the cover i somehow perceived that as a salt shaker? |
eleydan chapter 10 . 1/6 I love your storie it's so sad that you rushed the end it's one of the best I read! I still add it to my favorites list in the hope that one day you will continue. |
Guest chapter 9 . 11/5/2019 this last chapter is a disappointment. I wish you would have finished this story properly |
Zurver chapter 10 . 9/7/2019 Oh wow |
Zurver chapter 8 . 9/7/2019 Assdffghjjkklll “Bambi”?! Come on! |
Zurver chapter 6 . 9/7/2019 Come on, seriously? Hufflepuff? |
Rosiekay chapter 10 . 8/3/2019 Interesting story I wish there was a sequel |
Chobbit Android29 chapter 10 . 4/27/2019 Holy smokes! That ending was good. |
The Odd Page chapter 10 . 4/18/2019 Please continue this! I know u have no plans 2 but it seems like an awesome story 2 read! At the very least actively look for someone 2 take it up. (If I could write I would definitely do so but I can't write for $*** and wouldn't be able to give this story justice ) Anyways thanks for posting the first year, even though I want more. |
PrincessMagic chapter 10 . 3/30/2019 Wow, this was such a Brill idea. I'm glad you used summaries to let us know where you were heading! |
Guest chapter 7 . 3/21/2019 The plot is lovely, but it’s develop is quite disorganized. The story would have been much better if you have tried to work more on descriptions and characterization. Everything seems like it was all thrown together with no planning. |
Fan chapter 10 . 1/19/2019 Beautiful story! seriously moved me! Even though its not done yet your plot is just AMAZING! -Fan! |
006Sam chapter 1 . 1/10/2019 The wizard war wasn't fought for blood supremacy, you made that up. |
MortalCoils chapter 10 . 12/9/2018 This is definitely one of the best plots I've read. Hate that you didn't want to finish it but thank you for at least writing out the basics as even that was pretty great. |