Reviews for Shooting Star
blood-doll-aishiteru chapter 6 . 6/10
Luffy's interaction with Mihalk was interesting, I'm curious about his warning. Also I was surprised Luffy told Sanji about having been in the all blue.
blood-doll-aishiteru chapter 2 . 6/10
Luffy not hiding his strength from Ace and Sabo is interesting, I wonder what stories they tell others about their little brother, how they view him, now that he's most certainly not a weak crybaby.
Neko Nishiriu chapter 11 . 11/22/2019
More please
Zyriarch chapter 1 . 10/5/2019
So far, I enjoy this. The Pacing's a bit quick but that's hardly a problem. There are two extraordinarily good things about this fic compared to others, it's that it has good grammar and has no pairings, which are things I struggle to find.
Guest chapter 11 . 8/27/2019
Uensf
Its abandoned
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*sniffles*
Guest chapter 7 . 8/27/2019
Well...you just got ur uncanon confirmation to his scar on his eye post-time-skip
YokaiAngel chapter 11 . 11/20/2017
Amazing!~~~~~~
SeventhAssassin chapter 11 . 8/6/2017
its been... maybe a year? Will this story continue?
Dee chapter 11 . 7/16/2017
Ahh it's been almost a year since your last update! There are not a lot of op!luffy fanfics out there anymore, and yours is really recentl compared to the others, not to mention that you are writing this so well. I love how you're trying not to let luffys overpowered knowledge and strength interfere with the plot, but at the same time using it in just the right places either for comedy's sake or to continue your interpretation of this type of AU. I really don't like saying "omg plz update soon!" and I would much rather not pressure you, but this has to be one of my favorite one piece fanfics, and I will be anxiously waiting for a new update
Syhmera chapter 6 . 5/24/2017
Well I did smile on that part I found it cute n funny n l like ur idea of not killing mihawk cuz I like him very much
ob1292 chapter 1 . 4/6/2017
Interesting start, the only change I wish you had made was to get Luffy a stronger DF to consume. Yes I understand that his DF is very durable and versatile however a stronger one would allow him to better protect his crew and family.
Ryan Mashall chapter 3 . 3/24/2017
Cool beanz here
yuzukikuran476 chapter 11 . 3/11/2017
I love this story.
yuzukikuran476 chapter 10 . 3/11/2017
Please update.
yuzukikuran476 chapter 9 . 3/11/2017
Awesome story. Update soon
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