Reviews for Firstbite
FalconRukichi chapter 1 . 7/31
This is soo sweet! Cute and naughty! If only you write another sequel they mete for 1 st time
DG and Reed chapter 1 . 6/14/2016
This is really adorable, and clever.
BryannaB709 chapter 1 . 3/26/2016
Awww... Okay, I ship it!
The-Silver-Butterfly150 chapter 1 . 9/2/2014
I really love how Tooth reacts at the first sight of him haha

This was beautifully written, well done. I really had a great time reading.

Hope to see more from you ;)

Silver
TheEquestrianidiot 2.0 chapter 1 . 8/9/2014
Aww! Adorable! But Jack is a dick Mini-Faries. But this is a really good story and I do hope to see more RotG stories from you. You are good and have earned a faithful follower. Keep it up, and I will see YOU . . . in the next chapter. Bye-bye!
FlightFeathers chapter 1 . 8/4/2014
This was so nice and sweet. I loved it! I liked Tooth's cautiousness and Jack's mischievousness. Jack did a really touching thing by gifting her with the lost teeth. The last to lines spoken by Tooth were so her! Oh, if Jack handed the package to Tooth directly, I am sure she would have hugged him! lol. Why am I getting all... you know?

I wonder, what was Jack feeling the whole time when he went into the Tooth Palace, what he heard about her from other spirits, how he snatched those teeth from the baby fairies, how he found the lost teeth, and - most of all - how he felt when he looked at Tooth's portrait. We got to see that Tooth liked him, and it is only fair we get to see how Jack felt about her appearance. Please do a one-shot like this in Jack's perspective, if you can! I would definitely love to see more of this! :D
creatorX33 chapter 1 . 8/2/2014
Good job.