make him walk again!

It is fitting to have Dolores I-Hate-Everything-That-Is-Not-Human Umbitch to die to a Non-Human(though goblins are much better than humans)

And apparently, you never got to finish this most excellent story. Pity, that. Info hope you're now in a better way.

This is a brilliant story and I wish that I could have worked with you on it four years ago. No matter your disability I would have moved Heaven and Earth to help you get this brilliant tale out thete!

Hmmph. Written by a Yank no doubt. The proper and ONLY FORM of announcement of the State of Her Royal Majesty The Queen is as follows:
"Elizabeth II, of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland, of her Dominions across the Seas, Head of the Commonwealth of Nations, by God Queen and Defender of the Faith".
Get it? GOT IT? Good!

"Mi amor" is Spanish. The French variation for a woman speaking to a man would be "mon amour."

So after reading this all I got was a whiny baby Harry oh bohoo whos an angsty little bitch such a waste of time

Hello, I know that. you have written this a while ago, but I must show you another mistake in french
Jean-Paul said "mon cherie" to his wife, but in french mon is for a man so I would be "mon chéri" for a man and "ma chérie" for a woman same with "fiancé" and "fiancée" and even "née..." when one said for exemple "Molly Weasley née Prewett"

Learning another language is difficult, so I hope to have helped you a tiny little bit.
Thanks for your good work

Hi, I love this story.
The is some mistakes here and there, like it is Delacour and not Delacoeur.
You write that Fleur said "mi amor" in French, or mi amor is Spanish. In French, it is "Mon amour". Fleur de lys.
My mother-tongue is French.

I like very much how you go on with this. I don't like crossover too much, but I really want to read this story until the end.

Continue the good work.

I want to apologize. The comment from the previous chapter rude and completely uncalled for. What I should have written is maybe something more constructive and polite.

When you write something that includes French, an idea might be to ask someone who speaks and writes fluent in said language for help or rereading. Otherwise, maybe mention where you got the translation from or how it may be wrong. Again, I’m sorry I got offended over what should be considered nothing and so little.

Tip: that's not French. Mi amor is either Spanish or Italian depending the the context. In French we say: « mon amour ».

this fic is good if you skip all the parts that have harry in it.

seriously, Hermione is ALREADY IN STARK TOWER AND FLEUR WAS OKAY WITH IT CHAPTERS AGO! Your continuity is lacked in these latter chapters...

I was interested at the start in this novel it has very good gramar and is overall interesting but it has too many POV and is vritten in a fashion where i'm not sure who is the MC or are there multiple MC.

For one thing, I would charge all of the Wizards and Witches of Great Britain with treason and based on what each has done would determine whether they lose their magic or their lives.

Plus Magical Britain needs sanctions brought against them. Plus quite frankly Cousin Elizabeth needs to take away their right of self-rule. Plus I would point out that every last one of them is deserving of a whipping young and old alike. And this they each have to do hard labor for their actions.