A very nice piece of work. I'll be looking forward to seeing what you and Ron can crank out for us with the next chapter of this. You better start working, because I will be waiting for you to put something together. Lemme know if you want another pair of eyes or hands to help with the project, cause I'd be happy to do so.

Okay.

Update life of a mercenary... Please...
Well, back to the story... So, this new story also focus on side story similar to astray in seed... Though the story is more serious, overall it is nice... Though I want to argue about your original power plant... How can there be more GN Driver? I thought there are only 5 while the rest are using a condenser or a Tao version... And please, no mass effect tech base...
And as I say, update that story please...