Reviews for Six Times The Machine
osterreicher97 chapter 25 . 6/22
Hmmm... so we have a name now...
Guest chapter 25 . 6/22
Good chapter. It was worth the wait, this story’s pretty unique in the fact that it does halo and transformers together really well.
dantezess chapter 25 . 6/22
This earths humans and the bots holier than thou attitude is SOO fucking grating, I find it funny that by them trying to break her conditioning they are essentially dooming her to live on their earth forever because ONI doesn't appreciate their spartans being too "Human"...well not till much later at least.
dantezess chapter 6 . 6/22
I get "why" you had to change sixs character given that a mute character is a bitch and a half to write ,but the fact that she's so young and kind of spilling information left right and center AND gave up her armor is really annoying to me.
Datarus Finnigun chapter 25 . 6/22
Haven't had the time to read the chapter. Gonna read it all from the beginning. Really glad you're still working on it.
Enclave1 chapter 6 . 6/20
Wait a second if anything the clothes would be too small, even spartan III's were between 6-7 foot tall, never mind their armour giving an extra 6-12 inches, you forget that unless this noble six is unusually small, then she'd be significantly bigger than most people in 2008 as the average height in most countries is around 5'11" or 6', six would dwarf any nest members, I mean in the game the guy's 6'9" so even if you account for a females typical size six would still be around 6'3"-6'6"
rvbrwby chapter 25 . 6/20
Yay this story is still alive and kicking. Cant wait to see six get control of her armor so no insisdents happen again. Maybe the moniter could help her extract the other forerunner ai out
YSoSerious0104 chapter 25 . 6/20
Yay you updated! This story is sooo good, I can’t find any other good Halo crossovers like this one. Keep up the good work :)
shadowbellator.94 chapter 24 . 6/8
I do certainly hope this hasn't been abandoned!
AJ chapter 24 . 6/2
You know?...At this point I find it really hard to even feel anything for Six with the way she acts like a bitch with a stick up her ass... The way she fails to see any fault in her action simply pisses me off...Unlike Masterchief who is willing to see things from different perspectives she doesn't even know how to think straight...Her past is no longer a valid excuse for her childish behaviour.
Blackberry Avar chapter 2 . 5/15/2019
Uh... that felt like a non sequitur.
Agnos897 chapter 24 . 4/19/2019
Oh how I would love to see Chol Von in this fic!
Agnos897 chapter 24 . 4/18/2019
Now I just want to know about two thing:
Will the Covenant find Transformerss Earth?
I am really thinking that the Covenant would ally with the Decepticons they have similar goals their enemies have joinedeach other and they dont like humans.
One can only imagine what the autobots, decepticons and NEST would think about panicked unggoys, massive scarabs, mgalekgolos in battle, swarms of yanmee, their plasma based weapons and so on.
Another thing is could you use a tvaoan A.K.A skirmisher as another defective female preferably.
They are a very underrated species ,or should I say subspecies, almost never appeared in a fanfiction also when appeared were mostly males and were also present in reach.
Believe it or not females are the dominant gender for the kig-yar and they even become Shipmistress rank that is normally granted only to sangheili or jiralhanae.
Use Chol Von for example she was a tvoan shipmistress that thought the other species such as the sangheili would devolve, despised unggoy and even had some respect towards humans!
This would make this history even more intersting but anyways a pretty good fic so far so keep up the good work!
(Damn I really dont think hes even going to read this comment, such a shame I always wanted so see a female tvaoan in a fic and I really am a big fan of halo even used only the scientific names, well maybe someday it will happens, who knows, well bye then Zaraen until next time.)
dracologistmaster chapter 24 . 2/18/2019
Great chapters, I look forward to seeing how the sparring match goes between six and sideswipe.
COBRA DARKNISS chapter 23 . 2/17/2019
I do like This story and Hoping you update it soon but there are a few problems that I have.
1. Is that six is at times completely losing it, and saying things that no spartan in even the wrong state of mind would say, stuff like how she was recruited and her augmentations... saying that stuff would probably get even her killed off by ONI in a suicide operation for sure.

2. She is far more vocal for her hatred and emotions than we ever could have belevidd from what we saw on reach, which I might have a way for you to fix... the Spartan 3 had chemicals added to their augmentations so what when their are about to die or are basically in their last monemnts they stop feeling the pain and weekness. In a book ghost of onyx I think, they talk about a spartan 3 fighting without his heart for like a minute until he finally died, the downside being thes chemicals make them very unstable if not given every once in a while a suppressed for them. You could use this as a tool to have six not be completely out of line for the behavior of a Spartan, and have her show once more some sort of god danm discipline.

3. And finally is the elite, I can understand that six hates the elites and that at that point in time they are horrible monsters. However chief managed to get over working with the arbiter in literally 5 seconds when he was told of the circumstances and the reasons after a tense 5 seconds at gunpoint. I see no reason why six couldn’t think logically if Thel Vadam... THE ONE WHO COMMANDED the invasion of reach can be worked with, then some lower field Marshall should be able to be worked with as well.
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