I'm loving how your writing the memories. It was great to see Jack was creative from a young age and loved snow. The almost drowning was a nice twist and the swimming lesson was cute. I also like that you made Jack's father the mayor and just excitement for his sister was adorable. I also loved the warning talk North gave Jack before everything as well as seeing how resolved Jack is to finding out his past. Great work. I'm looking forward to next time.

I love the mystery element you added in with Jack curious to find out why the Moon took his memories. I also love how the guardians are so supportive and worried about Jack seeing something he might regret. Great work. I'm excited for the next chapter.

Is the entire story or is more coming

Please make a post to say the new book is out!

Super ! Dommagr qu'il n'y est pas de suite . :(

Nice touch with the purple blush! I couldn't help but giggle :3

Creap allert! Good thing that she's far away now. 6 feet under to be exact. Poor Sian. Go Jack, knight in shining armour. But why does everyone think that the priest will accuse Jack of witchcraft?

Maybe you got snowed in because you made Jack have a crush? 'Til next time

How do you pronounce Sian? And what does she look like?

So, humans blush from pink to red, Danny blushes red and green depending on his form, and Jack blushes purple? Oh, well, because of my skin-tone I turn orange-ish when I blush...

Wait. He's re-seeing his puberty? You brought this upon yourself, Jack.

This is a really interesting fic! Different from the others out there! Keep it up :)