so ya i rly like how the way made the seven immortal and you did it in a better way than most (most make it so that when they get powers they turn out to b arrogant assess) also cool ive never met (or in this case read something by) a hawaiian! also u did rly well on not making them all rly OC which is something a lot of people struggle with so well done!

Please update

update ASAP

Dude write more it has been over a years so get of your but and write also if you have died or had some sort of problem then I am sorry.

moooorrreeee pllllzzzz

great job. but you've over powered every single main character...giving them so many domains...hmph. can't wait for the next update. keep it up.
raging fire storm, raging off

Selene, Asteria, and Hecate are Titans...plus Primordials wouldn't come to Olympus just cause some weak demigoddess got promoted to a Goddess of Night...they would probably have a private conversation, if any at all. not flaming you of course...just trying to help make this more realistic by giving constructive criticism. the fic is very well written and I hope that you don't abandon this.

I really want to know what happens next. Can you update? Also can you do the big reveal to everyone that stiles is a demigod? I love that part. Also, can you not have a Percy meets annabeth fr a while because I think they need time apart to make the story more serious and not so much lovey dovey. Please please please update! I love this story sooo much!

I love your story! Regarding the chapter, Percy shouldn't have been surprised of Thalia being a god since Artemis visited him to update him in Nico's and Thalia's new statues. Hope you update soon!

Awesome job!

Awesome job

You are leaving a lot out of your story which are rather glaring holes.
First off, Percy using his powers in front of others. You have no one asking questions, no reactions, nothing. That really wouldn't be the case and not really normal for our little group of wolves.
A very glaring hole in this chapter was the fact that a woman who wasn't in the loft just randomly appeared out of no where after Percy walked into the kitchen alone with no other way in. No questions, no reactions nothing and even when she litterly formed that ball of liquid light out the air? Yeah I don't think anyone would just ignore this stuff.

Trife

I seriously love what you've done! I can't wait for the next chapter

nice work on this chapter

HOW CAN A LOWLY MUTT TALK TO GODS?