This story was so sweet. I loved how hyde was. Great job!

Aww! Loved it!

Mutual pining!

I don't think I'll ever get tired of reading all the different ways jackie and hyde could've fallen in love

Oh why didn’t this happen in the series ... love your work writing you capture the characters brilliantly as well as having great well thought out storyline

Awe how sweet!

I wish this was how it actually went. I really enjoyed Fez being called out too.

Swoon! I'm

Okay so my phone totally screwed up a few sentences below... :P Hopefully you can make sense of it anyway... stupid phone! xD

OHMYGOOOODDD x3 I LOVED this one so much! Like really, you write them SO WELL! Again with the dialogue and 'voicesI'm so happy I 'read in picturesI don't know the English expression for it xD But yeah, this was SO LOVELY x3 I love the way you kept so close to the show canon with only the small additions/changes of HydePERFECT BALANCE! Yup, yup... I'm getting addicted to the way you're writing these cuties.
All the love and hugs~

Just read this short story and I really liked it. You have a tremendous talent and I love Jackie and Hyde stories! I hope you write more.

This was so sweet! Those two last chapters were worth the wait after Kelso and Fez's gross competition to "win" Jackie.

Hyde and Jackie have a powerful connection they have probably never have with anyone else before and you manage to put it all on your stories in a perfect way! Nice job!

This is interesting (and super cute, that ending was perfect!).

I don't know why I didn't read this one before but now I'm happy I did! This episode in the show is really funny (and I enjoyed seeing Kelso losing his car), your take on it having Hyde in the travel too is awesome. He didn't wanted Jackie as a prize, he wasn't in the weird competition Fez and Kelso put on because he *is* truly in love with her and only wants her to be happy (and go away from him because it's killing him that she -he believes- doesn't want to be with him).

I loved the ending, the last two chapters are just awesome and the last one is soooo cute. They fit so good together! Loved it!

Damn, this make me feel all cozy and read on the cheeks. My face hurt of smiling so hard with the last two chapters, especially this one. The ending is so good and sweet, and so Hyde and Jackie.

What I think I'm liking the most about your writing is how every voice has a tone of their own and the POV is always well defined. You know the characters and that makes the reader know them in your story too. It's interesting to explore the story this way. It hooks you in.

This story is also a great idea. It's kinda lame the way Hyde was put away for this episode in the show, I guess so we wouldn't get distracted by his chemistry with Jackie and what had happened between them a little before. Seeing this take makes more sense to me (and i'm sure to many others too).

Great story!

Loved the ending! So cute!