Reviews for He Who Laughs Last, Laughs Loudest
Count of Nossex chapter 1 . 6/8
Naruto's 'spies' are kinda kinda over the top with their loyalties, also the kages look like sycophants to me
dai sennin kurosaki d naruto chapter 1 . 4/9
with his army of clones & all of his strong political connections that he's created throughout his career from wave, tea, birds, snow, hoshi, taki, & now 4 of the big 5 naruto can get the village rebuilt better than ever super fast. also you could have his rebuilding Uzu as a signal of sorts for other Uzumaki survivors & their descendants to return home.
Blizzard Blood Wolf77 chapter 4 . 3/24
I was wondering if and when this was going to be updated, then again having a lot of patience makes it worthwhile, be it hunting, fishing, reading or gaming.

I do feel bad for Naruto and most of Konoha, for dealing with an arrogant whiny child that tries to act like a man, who either tortures or kills people who doesn't give the baby what he wants, it's almost like reading VFSNAKE's version of Sasuke in this one with how similiar they can get regardless of which author does a different version of Sas-uke.
snake1980 chapter 4 . 3/17
have to say for the new chap it was great im so looking forward to see the fight and what happens after it.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/15
Great chapter here. I think that Sasuke should have been killed or imprisoned after the 4th Shinobi War in canon.
jeremiahkelley93 chapter 4 . 3/15
great chapter.
LordofTerror chapter 4 . 3/15
what a waste kill off 7 people all for a very anticlimactic chapter ending and a cliffhanger I'm actually annoyed in how you had us wait then leave us with this
Illuminated chapter 4 . 3/15
Thanks for the story thus far. I hope your health has stabilized or improved!
Issei Uzumaki chapter 4 . 3/15
Worth the wait!
Re Lovely Lover chapter 4 . 3/14
Well that is very much the case. The decision to kill them off is a needless and huge piss off and I'm done with this story.

I was already thrown off and waiting for a reply to know if Sakira is drugging Sasuke or if she and Narito decided to allow her to stay there and be fucked by Sasuke every night while she has Narutos baby in her or if hes being rendered unconscious and lied to or something.

Because if hes cucking himself just so Sasuke can find out Sakura has his baby in her instead from the one time they had sex and both are going along with it and no one else is saying anything either then I have to ask wtf and say I'm done.

However this chapter did it for me instead. Thos whole thing just some stupid round about way to make Sasuke suffer calling Sasuke crazy yet hes willing to cuck himself and let Sasuke nut inches away from his baby every night just to reveal his grand surprise later and putting the lives of those he cares about at risk pointlessly.

It should be obvious if hes trying to drive him crazy when hea already unstable he might just kill the others just to in case even if they didnt do anything. Or the clanheads so no one will stand against him. The whole premise is stupid and the stuff with Sakura vile.

Now Tsume, Hana and all this dying stupid deaths. Just hell no.

I like some of your stories for sure but this story is fucked the hell up. I honestly wonder how this is actually from the same author comparing ot to the others.
Re Lovely Lover chapter 3 . 3/14
Ah I forgot to ask last chapter. Is there going to be any info on why not only Kabuto and Orochimaru are around but friendly with eachother. Throw in them being friends with Sasuke and supporting Naruto?

That threw me for a loop just popping up with no context.

Wait wait wait wait the hell up. I was thinking that he intended to get Sakura out of Konoha so Sasuke couldn't lay a hand on her.

Is this story actually having Naruto needlessly leave Sakura behind so that Sasuke can fuck her all he wants only to find out she is pregnant with Narutos child instead from the one time he bedded her?

If that's the case that's fucked up royally.
Re Lovely Lover chapter 2 . 3/14
So um, can't the Daimyo overturn Sasuke's decisions and appointment if hes damaging or weakening their country? Ordering him removed and such?

Just wondering whether or not the Daimyo's existence will be acknowledged.

Please no more male nipple play. I dont get the fairly widespread push for ntr, male nipple play and armpits over the last while online but I can do without any of it.

In fact I'm not enjoying that whenever I've recently looked for Naruto pictures in general on sites like gelbooru or even a video everyonce in a while to see if anyones made anything that the majority are focused on Sasuke or Ai with the occasional random OC screwing those that are most important to Naruto.

Hinata, Tsunade, Sakura and recently I noticed some Himawari and Kushina as well. Seriously wish these artists would get off the ntr and general fucked up art they've gotten into.
Re Lovely Lover chapter 1 . 3/14
I see 3 names listed in the intro with Naruto but a blatant setup for a few more not there. The only one that it diesnt seem to be the case for is Hinata which I hope I'm wrong about because that would be annoying and disappointing for him to have a large harem. While having her still like him in this story but be the only one not with him.

Intro says Karin, Sakura, Karui.
Blatantly hints at Mei, Temari, Kurotsuchi and possibly Ino.

And I'm always a fan of Tsunade even if many aren't.

It would be good if he brought the Ichirakus out since Sasuke hates him and he might have them harrassed. Wouldnt mind a story that shows attention to Ayame as well.
Illuminated chapter 1 . 3/14
Shadow clones could rebuild Uzu!
bankai777 chapter 4 . 3/14
Naruto will crush Sasuke.
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