With all the stories with an overprotective yang i never thought the one to call her out on her bullshit would be ruby. Nice work.

Please update!

My mom just walked in to find me laughing like a maniac

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I was too lazy too log on my new computer.
Not for me everyone tells me to get tied to a pole and be shot

I'm torn between a love/hate for this story. It makes me think too much. : I find the pacing is great. I guess it's quite the page turner.

...week. Lol.

That nearly made me shed a tear. Nearly.

It felt wrong just by reading the date. Bravo, never felt that before.

...not a fan of OCs at all.

Hmm, to tell you the truth, I keep finding odd inconsistencies in the story. But the dress is the last straw. How could Ruby get a new dress for the dance and then in the very next chapter be wearing a dress she wore last year? And it wasn't Weiss wearing an old dress because hers had been shipped from Atlas for the dress. If you got a beta, they are not doing their job. Suggestion, read your story from beginning when you post or at least the last few chapters. Your grammar is pretty good. Just these inconsistencies.

A freezing streetcar named desire

Hi any plans for more to come soon still really good.

Helion didn't recongnize Pyrrha Nikos, four time Mistral tournament champion?

and i really wanted to see Pyrrha vs team HEAT(of course Pyrrha would win)

man i may have cried a bit not gona lie that was emotional at the end