Please continue! It is such a good story!

That would be so cool if Hiccup met a male version of Merida!

I can only assume due to the vast amount of incorrectly used words that English isn't your first language you should get a beta it'd help you tremendously

I feel a however or but coming...
And yay! Update!

your english is really good, honestly i didn't notice anything wrong, but its 'left' not 'leaved'

I love this story! Keep up the great work.

I had forgotten how much I LOVED this story. Truth be told, I had to read it all over again and i don’t regret it. Can’t wait for the next chapter! Honestly, I love your writing, very very detailed yet not annoyingly so. I find most authors don’t know how to do that right. Love the story! Can’t wait for more!

Me dolió... Siento que mi shippeo con conall no se va a cumplir, casi me pongo a llorar... Ella se va a ir y lo va a dejar... Auch, tengo corazón saben? Saber eso me dolió.

love the story... i know that i already post that but you put so many detail! like psychological, you made up a new character with hiccup (and conall and the others characters), when you read it you can still feel that is hiccup (but of course she is a girl, she left berk, she is confuse, doesn't made the best decisions) after the first movie httyd is when he start to mature because he became the lider of the dragon riders but in you story she needs to learn how to take care of herself and toothless, learn how to balance a new life and etc..
so many storys about what if hiccup left berk, but so far i think this is the best story because yours is more what happen during that time... well my comment was longer that expected

Now I'm curious on how she leaves? Is she found by some other Vikings? Or her people? Will dragons some how migrate to Scotland? Will Collan get a dragon and join her? Or will she be forced to leave early?
TOOM MANY QUESTIONS AND NO CLEAR ANSWERS!
But cute chapter all the same.

Absolutely love this story! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Someramente? Ya me había olvidado de la trama de la historia, de heho todavía en mi cabeza hay huecos pero hay algo que si recuerdo, era lo mucho que me gustaba la historia, y sabes? Nunca me habia pasado por la cabeza Shippearla con alguien diferente a Astrid pero ahora... Conall esta genial... Me agrada... Y hay pocas probabilidades que vuelva a berk a si que a la miércoles el hiccstrid vamos a shippearla con Conall XD, espero que este bien... Eso de no aparecer es preocupante, si me sales con que la traicionó te buscaré, te encontraré y haré que lo cambies! Jaja. Espero que no te tardes para tu año en actualizar otra vez... No quiero volver a olvidarme, que si no me acordaba que tienes deviantart yo estaría perdida con la historia, ahora que me pregunto...por que se escapó hiccup? En que parte de la película se escapó? Que paso con Astrid? La relación con Conall tendrá futuro? (ruego a thor que si) como sea... Nos leemos dentro de tres años jajaja, pero me gustó que el capítulo fuera largo.

I wonder where Conall was?
That was both cute and funny!

Story would be alot more enjoyable if you had someone proofread it first. Lots of mistakes and nonexistant words. Otherwise a nice story, not many have tried the gender twist and done it as well as you.

I love the way you write 3