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I can't believe you wrote this shit you have no idea how someone becomes a Kage and you definitely have no idea how much chakra naruto has its really baffling.

Anyone who reads the first chapter can understand that you have no knowledge of anything on how stuff works in naruto.

WTF DID I JUST READ!

Great story I really liked it a shame that you gave up on it.

Shitty. No work done on the scenes. Just the grammar and continuous cliche shit no one wants.

I want to say this but those Runes that are inscribed in the hand of all Familiars of the Void Mages not only grant them great power but forcibly make their Familiars love their masters and grants them great loyalty towards them.

Seriously? Are you that fuckin cliched to the point you'd bore others with your bullshit? Do you think readers here at are here for some cliche shit. You, are on fucking dumbass. Kill yourself.

Wouldn't Naruto know what happened to his clone?

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LOVED NARUTO'S HERO SPEECH

Please continue

Oh god your terrible at this I'm gone.

If your the much of an idiot.. Don't write stories. Seriously. You never watched naruto at all. You probably got half of fanfiction annoyed with you. Reason? That's not how anyone becomes hokage in the naruto series. Which by now makes everyone who's even watched naruto or just loves it. Dissapointed in you. You write about something you know nothing about. It's stupid. Exactly explains your self that one word. You like? Then don't write. I for one won't use the word stupid. But the word autistic. The word of the day, the word everyone mind as well give you. Well I'm gonna go now. Not reading anymore of your stories if this is anything to go by.

so kyuubi is always an asshole here.
definitely not canon, and confirm that your naruto haven't done anything important during fourth war since he hasn't had kurama help (i won't accept any excuse involving this fox helped naruto during war)
if you update this story, you should remove all sentences depicting naruto as hero of elemental nation from the first chapters

the chakra reserve excuse is bullshit.
if you removed naruto great chakra reserve because not canon naruto, it maybe can explain why he is security guard and loss hokage job.
But in this case you can't keep naruto as the hero of war and konoha seen in manga. no way your naruto could beat shukaku, no way your naruto could defeat pein and big no way your naruto could even scratch any single ennemy during fourth war beside the usual white zetsu grunt.