This chapter was rather overly flowery.

I really appreciate this chapter. Especially Sherlock's talks with the 'Stranger'. Very well written.

Fan at Heart.
Yeah, I know. My geography isn't so good. I couldn't go back and edit the reference to Germany out of these chapters, because the files are gone, but if you keep reading you'll see I fixed my mistake in later , hope it didn't throw you off too bad, haha

Copenhagen is in Denmark, not Germany. Try Cologne? Spelled Koln in German, I think.

That was a great ending! It made me tear up, so beautiful. I'm so glad thy can go home now! :D

Good to see the Major got his revenge... So, the only reason this poetic banter was going on and they didn't kill Moran on the spot was to wait for Mycroft's men to arrive?

Wow! Such dramatic dialogue in this chapter, so many literal references... It was nice to see the Hamlet motif continued.

That was a really emotional scene, I hope they can find a way to get out of this in one piece...

Well done! What a well written, intelligent, exciting, nerve wracking, can't wait to reread to feel the tension and excitement again odyssey. Thank you!

Wow, so many Shakespeare references in this chapter... Nice discussion on Hamlet there!

Wow. Just the prologue and it's very awesome.