Don't worry about the little thing's and i love this story i think Emma is a lot like her mother but she has her father's sense of humor and i love how you used the Avenger's in her life as well keep going. ;)

if you ever do a rewrite of your series you should have them encounter an Old enemy of Emma's who she claims stole something important from which is later revealed to be a teddy bear

Oh wow... I am speechless. This story is pants-on-head retarded. Lets have some fun:

1) In the timeline, by the time she leaves earth, Coulson is presumed dead by everyone and is in hiding.

2) This is the most painfully obvious self-insert character I've seen in a long time.

3) Natasha "Teh besT sPai evAr" Romanov bothered to spend 5 years training this kid? Yeah right.

4) That exposition was clunky as all hell. And why bother giving her a letter from her mother that explains a bunch of backstory to her if she gets a chance to learn it from her parents first hand literally two paragraphs later?

5) Punctuation is f***ed pretty much everywhere.

6) The pacing is WAY too fast. You can't introduce a character, explain her quest, have her set off, and complete her quest in less than a chapter. What is wrong with you?

7) Yes, the cold, emotionally detached assassin would not find it immediately suspicious that someone who managed to sneak up on her and proclaims to not want any of the obscene amount of money involved does not have any ulterior motives. Yeah, she would definitely be endeared and would snigger. Are you high?

8) Never write again. Ever.

Oh you HAVE to do a sequel you can't just leave it like that! I would love a cross over with some starmora and Emma with her second "family"! I love your writing! Can't wait for more fics from u!

Yeah so I'm too lazy to log in but this is Smileychameleon. You should definetly write a sequel this was such a great story!

NEW LAPTOP? COOL!

After Peter tells their daughter the story your should have her tell them about he life of earth with black widow and agent coulson I think it would be cool for the parent and their frieds knew were she learned some skill from

Oh the suspense! Can't wait for the next chapter!

Amazing! Sequel!

Oh my gosh the ending was amazing! Super amazing. I'm excited to see what happens now!

See you soon!
-AaX

"How? You're mortal..."
"You said it yourself. We're the Guardians of the Galaxy."

-GotG (2014)

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i like the concept...but, there is something thats bothering me. your character is the kid of Peter and Gamora, but they haven't even met until the whole prison thing. so if they didnt know each other until then, how is it that they could have had a kid?

what would Emma's face claim be?
Love this story!

WHY ANOTHER CLIFFHANGER?! DO PEOPLE REALLY HATE ME THIS MUCH?! :D:D:D. Now I gotta wait another 24 hours, mabye even more