Reviews for Desire
jacpin2002 chapter 3 . 5/30/2017
I need this story to finish and I want rivamika to win at the end by being together and having lots of babies.
Guest chapter 1 . 3/12/2017
RIVAMIKA 4EVER!
Guest chapter 3 . 9/4/2015
It's been a year since the last update. Please please please don't leave this story unfinished.
AsianObssession chapter 3 . 3/7/2015
Please, please continue! I love Rivamika so much it makes my heart hurt. I need closure please. Plus, it was mean of you to stop right before the steamy scene between Levi and Mikasa :). And I think we all need some jealous Erwin for breaking her heart.
Coco107 chapter 3 . 12/10/2014
This was hot as hell... Levi... dear, dear... Awesome and steamy. Have you planed to keep writing this? I would love to keep reading it.
Coco107 chapter 2 . 12/10/2014
Good! I'm hooked to this... Thank you.

More Levi, pls
Coco107 chapter 1 . 12/10/2014
This was great... My otp is RivaMika, but the erumika ship it's kind of cool.
I like the way you are constructing the storiesand of course the way my dearest Mikasa shines.
zombiegirl22 chapter 3 . 8/14/2014
The date up until Marie and Erwin entered the picture was perfect.

I love how Levi and Mikasa both have the same taste in music. I always have had the headcanon that both Mikasa and Levi would be fans of classical music.

Though I have to say, I really wonder what Levi said to the maître d to get the maître d to blush like that. Though I have the headcanon that both men and women are attracted to Levi (just like my headcanon that both men and women are attracted to Mikasa), so it wouldn't surprise that just by being close to him, was what maide the maître d blush.

"It annoys me to see you limit yourself when it is a known fact that you are a strong, confident woman.""And it is more infuriating to know how he managed to let you slip through his fingers."

I agree with everything Levi said about Mikasa limiting herself.

Though the sentence about it being infuriating to Levi made me a bit confused. Especially since shouldn't Levi be happy that Erwin let Mikasa slip through Erwin's fingers? because if Erwin hadn't, Levi would never have been able to ask Mikasa out on a date.

But then Levi's words of "you are as lonely as I am" cleared up my confusion. Your writing allows me to see how much Levi cares for Mikasa. He knows that Mikasa really loves Erwin, otherwise she would have moved on to someone else, instead of just concentrating on her work. He can see how much Erwin's absence has affected Mikasa, even though others may not see it. He wishes that she wasn't lonely, because he himself knows the feeling. And he puts the blame on Erwin, because Erwin is the cause of Mikasa's loneliness, so of course it infuriates Levi that Mikasa feels what Levi feels: being afraid to die alone. It infuriates Levi to know that Erwin was the one who caused this crack in Mikasa's armor, when Mikasa has always been a strong woman. And the crack is still there seeing as Mikasa never dated after Erwin.

I am glad that Levi and Mikasa had a really good time and that Mikasa managed to forget about Erwin for at least a little bit, and receive the attention she deserved from a man who would hold nothing back. Too bad Marie had to interrupt.

I WAS NOT EXPECTING FOR MARIE TO BE PREGNANT WITH ERWIN'S CHILD. MY POOR MIKASA!

AND ERWIN HOW DARE YOU HUG MIKASA WHEN YOU KNOW YOU BROKE HER HEART! HER HEART WAS IN THE PROCESS OF BEGINNING TO BE MENDED AND THEN YOU JUST HAD TO HUG HER AND BRING ALL THOSE FEELINGS BACK!

I know I seem mad at Erwin, but I really am not (just a tiny bit for Mikasa's sake though). I really love stories like these, and I just absolutely love angst.

Well Erwin will never be able to get out of that one. Having a baby with another woman, I don't see Mikasa running into his arms anytime soon.

I'm so glad that Levi was there to give Mikasa the support and love she needs.

I really love the way you wrote both of the intimate moments between Levi and Mikasa, and Erwin and Mikasa.

Such a contrast between the two different men, and yet both of them are just what Mikasa needs.

I don't know which ship to root for EruMika or LeviMika, so I guess I will just root for EruRiMika (I don't know what the official ship name for my OT3 is).

Though on second thought I will root for EruMika since you are righting this story for EruMika week and there aren't enough EruMika stories.

Thank you so much for updating!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/12/2014
Well unfortunately, I like Rivamika better than erumika, so I hope there will be more of it. It's still a very good story though, please update soon!
zombiegirl22 chapter 2 . 8/12/2014
My poor Mikasa! Having to find out such news from someone other than Erwin. My poor Queen's heart is broken. I have a feeling that Erwin was the first man Mikasa really loved, and to have her heart broken by him must be devastating.

Though this was a sad chapter for Mikasa, I really did enjoy it, because I was able to find out more about why the two of them split.

And boy was I surprised to find out that Erwin was engaged to Marie Dok.

I very much agree with Mikasa that Erwin should have let her know about his engagement. Because even though the engagement between Erwin and Marie was not known by many people, Mikasa's reputation might have been tarnished if anyone were to ever find out that Mikasa was "the other woman".

Especially being an up and coming lawyer, had Mikasa continued to see Erwin, any advancement or promotions for Mikasa, other people may have begin to spread rumors about how Mikasa only got promoted because of connections Erwin has.

Still, I feel that Erwin probably had his reasons for being engaged to Maria, political ones at that, though those still haven't been brought to light.

"It resulted with her in tears and Erwin banging his fist against her door as she shoved him out the day." One of my favorite lines.

I'm so glad that Levi asked Mikasa out. I'm hoping that Erwin sees the two together and gets jealous.

Thank you very much for updating, and I look forward to reading what comes next.
zombiegirl22 chapter 1 . 8/12/2014
Thank God for EruMika week! One of my beloved Mikasa pairings and I am so happy to see many people writing for this pairing.

First off, thank you very much for writing and sharing your stories with us.

Now on to my review.

Very interesting and well written plot.

You have written Levi, Mikasa, and Erwin really well. And i love how you captured Mikasa's awesomeness, and how she excels at many things whether it be titan killing or in this au, winning cases.

The way you build up Erwin's and Mikasa's relationship is done in a believable way. And I really like the use of flashbacks, because as the reader, I am able to see the differences in Mikasa to from when she was with Erwin to after the breakup, and the woman she is now.

Besides being a EruMika shipper, LeviMika is my main OTP, so I am happy to see that Levi is involved in this story as well.