Reviews for Failed Attempts
Child of Dreams chapter 5 . 9/18/2017
(sighs in relief)
About time, too!
Child of Dreams chapter 3 . 9/18/2017
(sighs contentedly)
I'd gladly marry Jamie any day...
Child of Dreams chapter 1 . 9/18/2017
(smirking slightly)
Crystal chapter 3 . 4/28/2017
Very interesting. Enjoyed it very much. I think Claire needs her head examined. If I had Jamie, I would not be wanting to leave all the time. Looking forward to other stories.
fynnsmom chapter 5 . 11/13/2016
Great story. I'm in the middle of reading Voyager right now. I'm glad I discovered Diana's books and this section of fanfiction.
fynnsmom chapter 3 . 11/3/2016
All I know is that I stop reading if something is bad. I think this is good. I really don't have anything to criticize and there's nothing much to say. That's how good I think it is.
fynnsmom chapter 1 . 11/1/2016
I've just started reading the Outlander books. I've read one and two. I just started three. I love them and this story is good also.
Annalamode chapter 3 . 7/28/2016
Love it!
OutlandishMama chapter 3 . 1/10/2016
This is really good! It's clearer than the first page you had, and answered to some degree the questions I had of "why does Claire want to escape" and "Why isn't Jamie letting her"? It's a nice twist to the story. Good work!
jinxmuffin chapter 1 . 10/17/2015
Love this! I've read it like 4 times 333
VeiledLight chapter 7 . 9/18/2015
It's rare that I review, but your little one-shots really impressed me. They were fun to read and to me, felt like excerpts from the books. Very well written with the perfect amount of humor. I will definitely check out the rest of your work :)
Guest chapter 5 . 8/10/2015
Cute. Xx
tracey chapter 5 . 7/22/2015
awesome job, I really like the part where you had her fighting with him and then submitting in the end. the characters were very realistic. I think you have great promise as a writer.
Tracey chapter 3 . 7/21/2015
I think you mean carnal knowledge but for 18 I would keep it strictly PG-13 so you are doing great. Not sure what OOC means. But I think you did a really good job of sticking with outlander feel for the characters especially compared to some of the other fanfictions I have read. I don't think Claire probably would have given him the whole flask of poppy but that's also a pharmacist talking (of course she was a nurse/physician as well). I think you are doing a great job.
Tracey chapter 2 . 7/21/2015
I thought the first chapter was very well written. Obviously the content was something you were interested in. I always thought Claire's attempts to escape a little ridiculous myself.
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