This is a really interesting story to read. I hope you will decide to update soon.

Love the story please write more

Pretty interesting story so far! Hope things go well! Please write more when you can.

You know? You should really update this its pretty...I don't know...AMAZING! Keep up the good work!

Please continue this story!

I really like this story :) wait... Does Percy have a New York accent or a brittish accent? When reading the actual books, I never incorporated them, at least until the blood of Olympus, but that just became weird since I have always had them with California accents. But on fandom it isn't as strange and is kinda fun to have accents. How strange...

i like it hope you add more

Update, please?

please make annabeth a witch. PERCABETH!

I'm currently holding back a gigantic squeal...

This was such a heartwarming chapter, with Sally's death and all. Her last words to her son were so kind and... motherly... so sad that she had to die this way. I can tell you are an amazing author, the scenes were so realistic and everything that happened were simply perfect, from the character's behavior to the plotline. You made it all seem so real, it's astonishing. Usually, people say Sally's actually the wizard sister, and that makes their story seem unreal and then it doesn't give much of a thrill to the readers. I really should try to do my homework because I have A LOT due for today but didn't even start... shame on me. It's just... I have to continue until this is done! I'm not having it any other way!

So... I'll finish this review here or I won't have time... it would be a nightmare...

Sincerely,
Your fan.

OMG! I am loving this story so far! You are an amazing writer! By the way, is this going to be slash? If so, I like the idea of a Percy x Harry or a Percy x Draco.
Please update soon, thanks.
:)

Great story! I really like it :D I hope you update soon; can't wait to see what happens next :)
PS. Can this be a Harry/Percy? :P

Nice. Just a few errors but nothing major. It's a nice start.

I really want more of this

Great story so far! Although when Petunia said that Percy would be staying with them for a while, at first I thought she said that he would be starving with them for a while. I went back and reread it, but I think it probably would have been accurate anyways. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!