I don't get why MassEffect Self insert MCs has the idiotic idea of joining Shepards crew. Most of the time they have no combat training and lacks any other significant skills too. And they don't take into account the consequence of altering events that may cause the future to be worse. Why not just go to a colony that don't get attacked by the reapers or slavers and enjoy the future and let shepard take care of genocidal robo-squids, that's what I would do.

Why the heck is he using the Imperial system?! He is from Germany and Canada, and neither of them use pounds or feet... i was just happy when at first meters were used and got to know where he is from so i would not need to convert all the time...

Still, thanks for the chapter!

BUT MY BODY... MY BODY TELLING ME YEEEEEEESSSSS

Just in time for the batarians

"Only Sith deal in absolutes."

Then why do Light siders hate Grey Jedi?

Rest in peace Ming. We will miss you.

Saying he hasn't met anyone more fucked up then him. Lol he mustache forgotten bout everyone he worked with.

My question is why does he keep talking as if he has a conscience? Dude literally hangs someone and thinks to himself “what’s wrong with me?” You’re a fucking sociopath that’s what’s wrong with you. A sociopath that needs to be put down like a rabid dog that’s who.

Great story.

yep, weak as hell, if ur going to force a disorder do better research and make it come off less as a last minute toss in because you wrote yourself into a corner. the bs gets stronger and stronger in this story.

this was a weak ending, he just randomly does something he has never done before just so you can add more bs next chapter smh weak.

yep, he's a bitch, all this fearful shaking but ready to talk shit when he has the upper hand, Grade A bitch in my book.

so the objective is to turn ur mc into a morally bankrupt asshole? I could be wrong since it's still early, but either way ur mc comes off as a bitch. He's ballsy enough to talk shit but when its time to put up he punks out. In all honesty, ur guy shouldve been dead due to the golden rule. I do enjoy the story, it helps that I'm not actively trying to dissect it like i do other stories, but its decently good so far.

Wow! Wow! You finally did it! After five years of constant writing and so much going on in life, you finally finished it! And what's this? David gets the Prothean visions and not Shepard? What the heck is going on! What a twist! AAAAAH!

Really sad to see Ming die as well, as it stands... David is the last survivor of the Chalkhos incident... rest in peace, Ming.

On to the sequel and far too soon am I beginning to prepare myself for what's to come, but as it stands, knowing you... you're gonna twist my heart in more than one way! YAAAS!

bitchin'