Awwwww! So cute!

I really enjoyed this chapter. This was a humorous premise for this chapter, and the way Ash acted reminded me of how he acted earlier in the story.

OMG This chapter was so hilarious ugh. I was dying when Drew said, "By the way, who carries around handcuffs especially on a date? Is he planning to..." XD XD. Also wow he proposed! I really like this David character. I know he's going to be like one of those fun dads but also serious when he wants to be. I really enjoyed this chapter a lot and I'm so sad to see that it's going to end soon :/

I haven't been here in so long but i think this was where I stopped reading. I'm glad that Ash took his own advice and told his mom about Serena. And that whole water scene was so cute awww! And YES! Their official date! It only took...26 chapters XD

I feel so happy for Dawn. She has Ash by her side, got a loving, caring and supportive father and now her mother isn't against het dancing either! You deserve it girl!

HeyaaaA! Happy New Year! This chapter was so fun to read that I was grinning the whole time! Really, I was waiting for someone to make that handcuff joke and Drew really did that!
Just 2 to 3 chapters left? Really? I feel bad but also excited to be honest! Lets hope for the best!

The chapter was so sweet and good! I can't believe they are alone..! Ahem behave Dawn and Ash behave ahem!

I loved when Ash and Dawn used to fight lol. And when ash saved Dawn

A heartwarming chapter! Sad that it's going to end soon but overall, a loveable story! :v

I loved this chapter so much! And I'm so made the fic is gonna be over I love this.

Great job.

That was cute! So so cute! Nothing is better than coming clean and free! Although its a bummer that the fic is ending soon.

And yay! I was one of those who figured out about Kenny and Serena.

Great story, loved it.

Awesome chapter!

Wow you hit me with the M. Night Shyamalan plot twist good fricking chapter