my name is Raven, nice work

...I'm not sure what I should make of this... But if you're willing to put the effort into this, then please update.

This is so great! But yes, there is something about Mephiles that is charming... More! I wonder if she will be his bride...?

AAAHHH! That's what happens when you try to be nice! Poor Eve! So does this mean if Mephy saves her she'll fall for him?

Interesting... Better be a side story to work on because your other stories are just a little better and have a stronger following. You don't want to lose your followers from your other stories if you know what i mean. But please do keep writing.

Is that eve on the cover? If so, she has nice tits.

This is a good story! I can't wait to see what else you put up. Keep up the great work! :)

Eee! Eve and Mephy! But is it a trap...?