This is beautiful amazing magnificent breathtaking and I can’t stop reading it

this was written so well, you're very skilled at writing! i loved how the story built up to teach's death, it was captivating.

This was AMAZING!

10/10

Fantastic

Wow...that was... ummm.. to be honest.. that took me by surprise...i.. I have no words to describe what I'm feeling right know to this story... but.. I love it..

simple but masterful interpretation of one of One Piece's great mysteries. I really want to see you make other, longer and more elaborate One Piece fanfic, because the Straw Hat as a symbol of the Pirate King crown and the greatest power of Luffy's, The Will of Death, can really be explored in a longer term of a story. Great work.

Awe-fuking-some

Wow. This is... incredible. With your storyline around the war and straight forward naration that create the story. And of course the D. I never thought of that possibility but who knows. We have a long way to go to know and this theory is, by far, the most interesting one that told in a story. Thank you for your story!

Fudging Fitch! Freaking Fudging Fitch! I love these stories! They always put down what I believe is true and had been true.

HOLY SHIT! Just WOW...

This was simply supreme. Very well-written, although the meaning o D. was unexpected and slightly jarring.

Really like it, you could make a new and bigger story with this setting. Or, just continue with it (y)

Suuch a good story. Incredible

*stares*

... Holy shit.