Hey thank u so much for this chapter it’s was long and even tho the action hasn’t started yet it’s still good ! I hope u decided to give us another !

Oh my gosh, this fic is so amazing. I was just rereading the Darkest Powers too and found myself back on their fan fiction page after a long time. I’m so happy to see that others still remember/write this series!

I really love your story! The plot is so well written and the characterization is so accurate! I also really like the little portions of screenwriting in between. This is a really enjoyable read - thank you for sharing it! I can’t wait to see what happens next!

Thank you so much for updating I can’t wait for the next chapter !

This is unlike other stories. Just enough minor changes to make interesting developments. I am daydreaming nonstop about what going to happen next and what happened before when it was just Derek, Chloe and Rae.
Please please please update soon. I desperately need another chapter.

I love it! I'm excited for more!

I like your writing style and the bits of script at the beginning and end are excellent! Sentences flowed really well and cleanly, and I like the way you approached Chloe as a character. Movie nerd, recovering from Lyle House, bit of self doubt, sprinkle of undead...perfect! The fact that your chapters are labeled as scenes is a nice touch.
- Rainbow Cornflake :)

I love it so far! I like the detail in your writing. I can't wait to find out what happens next! Please keep updating! I hate it when I find a really good fanfic and the author stops writing right at a cliffhanger :(

Nice story, very intriguing, hope you update soon

Ouch!

Good intro, I wounder what happens next!