Love it! They should have put that fight scene in the episode because I bet Asami didn't go down without a fight!

This is good! It's kind of like my story "Airbenders Forever," describing a fight that must have taken place but was not shown onscreen. There are some fragment sentences-like the one about Naga, before she is tranquilized-and extra words. I don't understand how "She was new to friendship" but "no longer new to the feeling of letting her friends down," that seems kind of contradictory. Overall, though, this is pretty well written. I like the reference to the original Team Avatar, and the last line recalling Katara's hope.