Reviews for Until My Last Breath
Debbie Hicks chapter 7 . 7/30/2019
8. Chapter 6. CLAIRE YOPUNG Biten a child to best friends to the brother with teir then two both then Aliens and the Vulcans wholliest of blood was infectd from alien venom of both the screaming you killed people freak then ten get her with they screaming then Executed tore into pieces with you Cullens hid a Hunter is infected by venom get her/they then the chained the screaming then then Assaulted then tore from me Killed by the Volturi for now executed with three were next destroyed with for her sinned crimes as Death based ones no longer alive Murdered were Atomized but VAPORIZED! Good guard then brought them then with the one killed more Both laid dead bring to Volterra then too late Melted thde damages was greaty the suddenly was Immortal forever but already deceasd from sliced ten Nothinness was infected with both alien venom took over a goddes was Bellona the goddess of Starfleet Command and the rightful United Fedration of Planets was Neplilin so they Was a Shadowhunter bred to hunt demons Alice she's not human so they with us/they/they We been torn into pieces resurrected suddenly Dean felt it the anger the rage KA ME M KA ME HA! Fired a real magical energy glowing he felt his Hunter's clothes henshined from a convention from Anime ones his Saiyan nature emerged great what happend from NSA Bodysuit then myself was glowing BETAZED AURA POWER! MAKE-UP! My gun violently shifted into a magical; holiest sword caught it then letting loose a Xena Warrior Princess's war cry exploding more ringing and soprano and angelic then swirling and twirling oh my god stood as a Sailor Guardian knelt to the three Protected by Betazed the planet of Telepathy the Soldier of Seduction the Guadian of the Great Fire Daughter of Rixx the god hero rules the Fifth House of Betazed SAILOR BETAZED Now in the name of the planet Betazed will PUNISH YOU IS HERE! Then sliced with they Nothingnss brought there good guard killed from here are departed are Neplim dead Too late That's it you'r sushi Held a Ward with true Japanese symbols of religious
Japanese priestesses wre miko in front of my own face longer hair began flying with freshly
cut bangs was different trained in Japaneses purifying and spells and hymns and chanting into humble meditation glowing more stronger Daimons Rin Jin Shi Chi Zai Kai Tou Bai Rypu Pryu Retsu Chou ZEN! I CALL THE POWER OF BETAZED GREAT FIREBALLS CHARGE! BETAZED HOWLING FOREST IGNITE! It was real magic within myself glowing EVIL SPIRIT BE EXORICZED! DEMON! I COMMEND YOU TO YOMI YOKAI Then gliding then the a burst of light YOUMA TAISAN! Now SAILOR MOON MOON TIARA BOOMRANG! MERCURY AQUA MIST! MARS FIRE IGNITE JUPITER SUPREME THUNDER CRASH! VENUS CRESCENT BEAM SMASH! URANUS WORLD SHAKING NEPTUNE DEEP SUBMERGE! SATURN DEATH RIBBON REVOLUTION! PLUTO DEADLY SCREAM! a burst of wind Pu' PINK SUGAR SPIRAL ATTACK! Then KA ME KA ME HA! SPIRIT GUN! Sam oh my god we died granted powers gasp The small Child's planetary powers shot merged wit her weapon gotten more strongest shattered with ours they fukus changed sudden twirled acted like her aunt ROMULUS DEADLIEST TOY HOWLING RIP THIS MEANIE DEMON APART! SLASH! It screamed BEAUTFIUL! T'Vel I am ok oh my god we are what Immortal like Duncan MaCloud the Highlander it was too late nuked frely then us/they were not aging/dying /changing anymore Momma mia they are Warriors oh yeah wanna a bet Bub quit it sorry now they with us/they with things attached a 1969-1987 Pacemaker to live full time them merged with the car were more rooms for us/they nuked we more than rooms then Exploded from here With the other ones as all of them Both good bring them then suddenly lost from here were with their own Destroyed good bring the criminals then it was too late killed by them melted us/they had IVF Kids were next they were as all of rooms then it came Left from here that Sumok drove for the brothers and myself acting as our privately Hunter driver then the child Darla wailed I Want Grampa oh no it's huger but we gathered from homes brought Pets/young oh Puppies how cute then it was more than as all of rooms to live full time while on the road Nuked from here shatterd it was real then was far futurstic where are we in South Carolina a ghost sighting we went from Jose and the Pussycats from Archie first our eyelashes to look from the Archie come character women did our Dressing Dawn's leg poked out Paul spat out beer YO WOMAN! oh god he was bewitched to see her clad in this was 6 foot Muscular Short Black hair brown eyes full of desire was Horny herself ad a child from him Herself hey who's dog oh Puppies are you cute sorry Tigger oh my it's my kitten gracious me Hello Bobby guess RV-Car combination nuked are lived full time it came too late that Nuked from here from here then it was huge by now a snore from Strom was asleep heavier now the very far as all of it was post-modernizd then Shattered from here both gone then never aged again that was it no more it was the Impala RV Unicat clang! Ouch! the brothers and myself with they were trained so they acting strangely like from V The Final Battle wre fighting for a place to act as headquarters who used a Far Futurstic phaser like the Vulcans acting like Juilet Parrish was a host so they newspapers reported of us/they were in fact Federation Freedom fighters wearing both from planets Sam yeah it is that a Bajoran earring can't praying to the prophets for a sign yes he tapped hios brother look on your nose ridges you died from it crap I am a Alien me too so our women Pardon yes Captain uh oh Captain I Sense a Powerful mind! look! my mouth never moved yikes she's telepathic her eyes sir are Black irises is Betazoid Bella you sensed me yes Imzadi he fainted Edward groan my head me her imzadi what are you died in both gasp it was too late the world had changed again twice again but us/they were in fact not humans.
Loveforwolves143 chapter 7 . 6/14/2019
I NEED MORE!
Delilah Moon chapter 7 . 5/17/2018
I just wanna say that I'm liking this story...I hope you come back to it sometime. I can relate to having writers block. It sucks! Or I get an idea or plot bunny and I'll start writing it then lose my train of thought and I completely forget where I was goin with the story. SO I hope that your block breaks and you continue with UMLB!
Kaiana chapter 7 . 5/11/2018
Please update... Will it be Bella/Jasper pairing?
tamwhit chapter 7 . 5/22/2017
Please update your story soon
Mismatched Melody chapter 7 . 1/27/2017
FREAKIN UUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU PPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP DDDDDDÄŽDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA TTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE UUUPPPDDDAAATTTEEE SSSOOOOOONNN PPPLLLEEEAAASSSEEE I'M DYING FOR MORE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I LOVE THIS BOOK IT'S AMAZING! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! DON'T LEAVE ME HERE! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! I NEED MORE! ! ! ! ! !
obsedian-dream chapter 7 . 7/3/2016
Dean please
Destineyofme chapter 7 . 5/4/2016
please write more on this story soon I miss it
Mist17 chapter 7 . 3/27/2016
UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU POSSIBLY CAN PRETTY PLEASE!?
andy6rocks1 chapter 7 . 2/8/2016
This is pretty interesting. I would love to see an update soon :)
RougeReaper chapter 7 . 10/30/2015
I love it can't wait to see what Bella does, please update soon
AnimeFreak71777 chapter 7 . 10/30/2015
:D
vampirelady13 chapter 7 . 10/10/2015
I love it so far. I hope you up date soon. Good luck with that righters block. Thank you very much for writing your story's
vampirelady13 chapter 5 . 10/10/2015
I just came across this story. I hope your still alive. I know life sucks but killing yourself is not the anwser. I hope you find love and happiness in your life. I dont know you but if you need to talk i do care.
galwidanatitud chapter 7 . 7/19/2015
just recently discovered this story and i am loving it. more please! :D
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