Okay!

I love your story so much! Its really good, i cant wait to read the rest when you get the rewrite up. I know exactly how you feel with the whole 'im better at writing so im going to fix this now', im doing the same thing with one of my own stories. Keep up the good work! (My username is DDOGirl if you want to pm me)

Don't be apologetic for improving your writing skills. Improvements and challenges are what make life fun, so don't worry about wanting to rewrite it. I know I may have confused you, but I understand and will support your decision.

Also, thank you for letting us know that you are planning to delete this version once the newer one is caught up. I appreciate the knowledge. You keep doing your best and improving. No need to apologize.

I'll be waiting to hear from you when your able. I have your username (DayLightDove) stored in my mind with the accounts to check. (However, please know that even as a guest user, I keep very closely with stories and authors to the best of my abilities. Even with this, I too, sometimes have long absenses when school or life gets crazy. But I will be supporting you for a long while-if you think of it as an account, I believe it would be a follow (?))

Hahah...Oops I guess I should have checked my dates. This is still good (I am now wondering how I missed this chapter when I was reading it before...) But I will still be patient. No worries and no pressure (I see the "hiatus/planning to be rewritten" now).

Yay! An update. Thank you for this. Jack playing with the "wee devils?" Now that is something I would like to see. XD

I have a feeling they would get along quite well.
Once again. Thank you for the update (and consequentially letting me know that this story is still in progress.)

Please continue this story *over dramatic sigh* ill just die if you don't. Haha, just kidding, but seriously.

Do they know Jack's blind!?

Ooooohh! Update!

So, Merida doesn't know about Jack's blindness? :/

What?! Only three chappies?! More, man! MORE!

so cute! i love blind jack, he is so wajsjksakjjskasjaksjak kawai 3

Yay this is so great!
Hope you're going make more soon :D

So cute. Can't wait to see more!

Ohmigosh! I love the prologue and what you said about the world is true: not everyone will accept all your flaws and scars. Some will treat you wrongly and you will get hurt, but always remember that there's someone who loves you for you. I really hope you update soon because I'm curious to see how this will turn out.

I can wait to see what happens!