What a nice and well written story, you should write more Arkos.

I especially liked that it wasn't the usual "I LOVE YOU, JAUNE!" confession that writers often have Pyrrha make, that's unrealistic for her to have feelings that deep for Jaune this early on.

Her not being sure what she feels, but knowing that Jaune's important to her and that she likes him? That, I can get behind! Well done to you sir!

Great story!

I completely disagree with your portrayal of Pyrrha at the beginning. You say she is arguably the best first year at Beacon. She is definitely the best first year, and likely the best student at Beacon

I really enjoyed reading this story. It kept me waiting and hoping. Not that much mature but u had just the right amount.

Hailstorm

Daw, that was cute. And I'll be sure to check out your other stories.
Saluut.

Do you know how hard it is for me to find a Arkos lemon Fanfiction?

God, this was just catharsis for the heart. So good!

I loved this

Very cute, very passionate, and very well-done. I loved the lucid dream concept.

That was pretty awesome. The confusion leading to a fluffy ending was nice. Good work!

damn jaune you go boy

Putting aside the actual content of this chapter (which was incredible, by the way, good on you), that pun was a gift all its own. "A Phyrric Victory". That honestly should've been the name of the story, too. XD

This is simply a very well-written piece. None of the characters actions felt forced, and it felt natural from beginning to end. Well done.

ah i love this so much and you've written jaune and pyrrha so well. i also really enjoyed reading cast of characters. this is definitely one of my favourite arkos fanfics

This is excellent. I love how you included the morning after, to really clarify the kinds of things that go on in these sort of relationships.

Excellent work.