It’s nice to see Mustang in a parental role. Not that I don’t enjoy it, but most of the fics in this fandom are for shipping the two.

Nice little one shot. Thanks for it.

I loved it! :)

Here you are again writing incredible things! This is the most in-character take on Ed and Roy I've seen in a while, and on an interesting topic, too. I appreciate the balance of character-study and world-study going on here.

And, yeah, once again, just emotionally poignant and beautiful. Nice.

This story was brilliant! I love the little scene where ed imagines himself as a fire alchemist. Also, thats an interesting head canon that roy burns himself a little everytime he snaps his fingers. Dark, but interesting. Anyways, great story! I really enjoyed it.

This was tense and sweet at the end. So good, like all your works

Now...can you make a story where Roy dose teach him?

wow. . . fantastic! XD *seal of approval*

When I started this, I thought it was going to be the funny sort of fluff. It became the more serious sort of fluff. Very nice story :)

Oh!I like your fic a lot!It's so touching! :) It was very well written and I think you manage to show Ed and Roy's personality very well :D .

A very cool story! Reminded me of the fluffy parental stuff :3 very happy .

Cute! .

This was really good!
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Damn... that was sweet.

This was really sweet:)