omg

Honestly, it was really good! I just wish there was more

I really like it but i'm just wondering how it came from rowen to rowen, nalu, gruvia, gale, and other ships xD

Oh god, I thought they were doing something else... I'm not dirty minded btw. Pretty sure other people thought the same

Amazing

I liked this story mostly because it's a good rowen story

Its Cute!

COURRAIT COURRAIT POUR VOS VIES LES MECS

This was good,but do more.

OMG I THOUGH HE WAS ACTUALLY HURTING HER YER GOOD

Its really good but I think it needs more Rowen

OMG! That truth or dare game was freaking adorable! XD I love Wendy and Romeo! Great chapter! I really like reading your story! :)

I... I live yet... *groans of death ensuing

In all seriousness, I take a break from Fanfiction over the summer, I mainly access it from my school computer, and I have little reason to use the when I have a gaming computer 5 feet from me. I thought I was gonna end up having to spend weeks catching up on the fictions I like... it took me like, 5 minutes. So many authors that I like are gone, yet this story still lives. Think it's a testament that a writer will work to finish their fics (Chapter of 18 of my story is never coming RIP). So with my nitty gritty out of the way, lets look at the chapter:

I think the date was well handled, Mira shenanigans, making references to the OVA's (which so little people have watched outside of those short clips you can find on youtube), and overall the tone of the conversation.

Something interesting (not bad mind you) I found about this chapter was that Wendy was the more dominate one of the relationship. Usually she's just shy and awkward and Romeo has to take the lead in the anything on a date, he usually has to prompt to her to exit her comfort zone. Throughout the chapters, it has been shown that Wendy is more out going and willing to leave her comfort zone a lot more then usual, but she still seemed be a little clumsy/shy/awkward that was originally her character. I honestly like this change about Wendy's character when compared to other fics, because it shows that she has matured a lot over the years and isn't the exact same person, no one ever is the same forever.

I'll be honest, my favorite part of any story, regardless of whether it goes in detail about its lemon or not is the morning after stuff. Lucy and Natsu are just priceless the morning after. They fit the old married couple role to a tee. I did feel like the "whether or not Lucy is now flame proof" conversation was a little out of place but it was segued nicely so no complaints there.

Mira rigged Gray and Juvia to have a baby... holy shit that woman has 90 plans playing to perfection at once, when does she find the time to do this?

Keep up the good work (because this is now 1 of like, 6 stories I have to read, I need to go story hunting later this week)

Lol Romeo should have gave Wendy a even painful punishment like losing her virginity or beating her up or other stuff XD and Romeo better watch WHERE he's putting them hands though XD

This fanfic is awesome great work and make an update soon :3 an idk if this fanfic is perverted XD I'm 9 years old