I liked it. a different take on Ichigo but one that is true to what was shown in canon. Pity you don't write on FF anymore.
Truly an enjoyable read.

Loved your take on bleach, I really hope you make a sequel. Totally worth the last 24hrs or so I have spent binge reading this and the first two books. Thanks for a interesting story.

Thank you for writing this! Really liked the character interaction in all three of these.

This was really good, and I was like its complete OK and then bam it's on a cliffhanger and now I'm pouting. I hope you get the chance to write the next part soon I'm looking forward to it.

Hello!

I have to say I have loved all of your Guardian books, they've really been excellent. I hope you return to them to write more, but if this is the last, then thank you for sharing them with us.

Shawn

...Yeah, still not sure if I like this series or not...I personally think Yamamoto is stupid AND a hypocrite, but that's just me. Yay for Tatsuki calling him on the stupidity! :D I wish you the best of luck with your other projects, and I hope that one day you return to this series.

Thanks for the chapter, have a very merry Newtonmas and a happy new year. :D

Loving this chap I can't wait for ur next story I hope it doesn't take to long.

I really enjoyed this chap immensly I can't wait for more, keep up the amazing work.

I think you missed a few breaks in the Flashback Spell.
The content itself is so divinely awesome that mere words cannot do it justice.

meh very annoyed here Ichigo gets full power ups so much easier than everyone else and on one else gets to have their OWN training time... unfair really. but that is life
actually... does Icihigo know that renji has bankai? I mean it didn't seem like he USED it here and stuff and... yeah.
anyway that bit about potential coming from Kenpachis mouth is a little. ell interesting, its not QUITE the same thing as hes mentally messed up but... sorta expect Kenpachi to get sent to do training ad yamomto conveniently forgetting to mention that he has medics on stand bye for both of them afterwords so no death fulfillment and fantasy and stuff.
watching Unohana and Kenpachi interact AFTER they have their intimate murder trying to kill people thigns should be... VERY interesting.

so... some of the fights seemed a little... well Ukitakes powers are perhaps the picture PERFECT one to defeat Ulliqora what with his energy cero's and energy javelin, but I guess the fact that Ulliqora is to popular in most peoples minds to NOT die at the hand of the main hero and I guess a sickness attack... hmm.
well you did a lot of... could lead to some mess in this chapter but at the end of the day... I liked it still. so thanks for the chapter!

...I kind of want whoever thought mind-whumping Ichigo was a good idea to die an incredibly painful death. I congratulate you on making me angry at an unknown, fictional character. :) I really loved this nice long chapter, and I wanted you to know that I enjoyed reading about Ichigo's interactions with his powers. I hope Ichigo gets to beat the crap out of someone soon, work out some of his pent-up aggression. :P Please keep up the great work, and I wish you luck with the next chapter!

Oh, that was well done! A great chapter overall and then a fantastic transition into the most recent incarnation of Zangetsu. My only complaint about this chapter is that it ends. But I don't suppose there's anything to be done about that.

Thanks!

Shawn

I bet THAT part didn't go quite as limp, if you know what I'm saying :P

Awesome chapter. I want more. Gimme.

heh him and Renji can get in a true conversation about what their sowards are supposed to be. is that what Byakuya meant when he talked about mastering their bankai's?

heh anyway I love hwo your handiling everyone just living and how they interact here Byakuya and how your handiling him is... nice.

and ichigo doing the fake name so I can talk and things! hopefully Poor Kira doesn't spill about things under the influence... and Hitsugia and Ichigo interactions! what fun indeed.