Reviews for Crumble and Burn
Jesuslovesmarina chapter 2 . 6/5/2015
It's interesting, because Sherlock really hasn't experienced a great deal of loss like John has. Even without considering Mary and the baby dead, John lost his family's closeness, lost many comrades in Afghanistan, and lost Sherlock for a time. Sherlock still has his family and friends, so this loss would understandably hit him pretty hard, because he doesn't understand the feeling.
madisonlevine chapter 8 . 4/28/2015
This is wonderful! I love how the reason Sherlock took the pillow was because it was the first thing John touched. Of course Sherlock would remember that. Not only because he's Sherlock, but because it's John. And ugh cries.
MelodyOfSong526 chapter 8 . 2/13/2015
More tragedy? Oh plead don't turn into Moffat, I beg you!

Ahhh yes a panic attack...I've had mild ones so I don't know what the extreme ones are like. Your details were very vivid, an I can definitely picture Sherlock going through one.

Oh Sherlock...there really is no such thing as too much sentiment, especially when it concerns you. Absolutely brilliant what you've been accomplishing! Keep it up!
MelodyOfSong526 chapter 7 . 2/13/2015
Poor thing...he really ought to learn by now that it's alright to have sentiment...

So very poignant. Heartbreaking, but absolutely wonderful to see Sherlock's sentimental side. You've done a fantastic job of honing in on it in this story!
Book girl fan chapter 8 . 2/8/2015
Tracking device on Sherlock's phone? Brilliant idea, John.
Book girl fan chapter 7 . 2/8/2015
Dude, going back in a burnt out building is NOT a good idea.
HistoryBuff1066 chapter 8 . 2/6/2015
Ahhh I love this story so far! You're a great writer, and I just can't wait for the next chapter! Every time I scrolled down the page I was kinda hoping it wouldn't end because I just want to read it all! XD Wonderful story!
Shadows Concealed In Darkness chapter 8 . 2/2/2015
Amazing story. You have their characters down just perfectly, from Sherlock's reluctance towards sentiment and John being there for him. :) Terribly thing you did to them! Absolutely horrible, you wonderful author, you. ;) Why must we torture our boys so?
But anyway, great job, I love it. Sherlock's panic attack after visiting Baker Street was, wow. I love that the skull survived, I had been wondering about him, actually. I hope they can make it through this. 3
Please update whenever you can, please!
Shadows
J.Doodle221B chapter 8 . 2/2/2015
This story is amazing and I'm awaiting yoir next update. Wish I'd discovored this fangiction earlier!
Nat-Nat 360 chapter 8 . 2/1/2015
Love the ending xx
paula.a.rushing chapter 8 . 2/1/2015
I am glad Sherlock was not having a real heart attack i was worried about that it can probably be hard to tell whether it is a panic attack or a heart attack i guess best nit to chance it that could be risky i hope that both Sherlock and John will be ok again soon but i think Sherlock is more hurt than has been realized yet physically did the drs at the hospital check him for other injuries?like internal bleeding from the fall down the stairs,bleeding inside his head from that fall? Or I guess I should say what next? Is is Sherlock who gets hurt again?or John? I need to know argh!
Please update soon i am loving this story!
SherlockWholmes chapter 8 . 2/1/2015
That was good. Very real.
Guest chapter 7 . 1/30/2015
OH NO! OxO
Guest chapter 6 . 1/30/2015
What about Mrs.. Hudson!? Is she dead too? _ if she dies during the 4th season I will just die
Guest chapter 2 . 1/30/2015
Very refreshing view on the story. I'm glad that those were the things that he saved from the fire. Xd
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