That was so amazing. i loved it ps im a big fan

Very neat idea. I'm interested to see how the interact with each other during the time it takes her to get on her feet and if he'll want her to go once she is. Please update soon.

Amazing. This is very realistic and well-written.

Yayayaya Tobias/four plz write more

It's so good!Keep writing it please..I WANT MORE!

Please turn this into an actual story pleeeease. You can wait until you're done with other stories.

Hope you feel better ... I may not know who you are but try and be strong , and your mom is probably up in the sky with Augustus Waters taking care of you ( I'm really cheesy )

I'm so sorry about your stepmom. I've had my grandpa pass away from cancer in 2012 after he had fought it for 7 years. Just recently, on February 13, my community lost Kylie Myers. She was 13 and had been diagnosed with Ewings Carcinoma in 2013. Your readers are here for you.

Niki tou've been through morethan i ever have, i have both of my parents (which are healthy) and a girlfriend, but after being like this I suspect your going to be like four, strong smart and not taking much sympathy not allowing people to look at you like a kicked puppy.

Stay strong
Reece ;)

I understand it's a great story tho

I'm sorry, girl. I wish you the best, and I don't hope you feel better. If you ever need to talk, even though idky you can PM me. And your boyfriend was never good enough for you if he broke up with you at a time you needed him most. So I wish you the best, and tale your time to get back on your feet.

I am sendng you my prayers!

Hi Niki, (I'm assuming that's your name)
I'm understand how you feel. My mom has cancer and its getting worse. I hope that you feel better soon, and if you want I'll punch your exboyfriend. NO ONE should go through a breakup right after losing someone. I don't mean to be creepy, but I'm a very empathtic person, so whenever I find someone who's hurting, I try to help. If you ever need to talk to someone, remember me. (I am studying being a therapist) please remember that there is always someone in the world that loves you. And, honestly, I've never met people who were more 'there-for-you' then on fanfiction.

:..)
Evangeline P.

LOVE LOVE IT!
will do more maybe?

Do you think you could continue this? Pleaseeee? I know it said one shot at the top, but it would be a great story. You are one of the best fanfic writer on this site. Please continue!
- Lilliana