Nice! Yang so hot.

Aw, I loved this. This is too funny and sounds something like Yang would do.

Going through all stories with Jaune and Yang tagged I seem to have encountered many by you. I like the whimsical nature of your writing. Yang'so playful nature really shines through. And Jaune as the victim of her attention is just icing on the cake.

''SHIT! SHIT! SHIT! YANG I'M SORRY!'' Yelled jaune ''Sorry ain't going to seal the deal. vomit boy!''

Indeed you should

Write it plz sempai write it

For the last part, I imagined Yang saying "How does this feel?" And then the camera zooming out super far as Jaune soundlessly falls off of a steep cliff into the water below, a topless Yang in unwilling pursuit.
It was funny.

Punch his teeth out? Really? That just kinda moved this fic into stupid anime harem antics territory. She doesn't get to do that, especially not after coming on to him so hard it might actually break some laws.

If you write smut I'd be first in line, your pg-13 stuff is super hot!

Trust me Jaune, the injury is worth it. And while reading the chapter, I wonder how Penguin managed to have such detailed descriptions of those techniques...Who cares I'm going to have fantasies now.

I pictured this a bit too well, you are an amazing writer keep up the good work, im gonna go "blow dry my hair" for the next hour and a half.

...I have the weirdiest boner...

Poor Jaune. Being Jaune is suffering no matter what. If he's not somehow suffering in some manner, his characterization is wrong.

You got his character right on the money, as well as Yang. Ruby seemed on-target for her brief appearance.

Nice work!

Excellent work. Would love to see more of these two.

Yes. You should.