| Reviews for Misfits |
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   celrock chapter 7 . 10/22/2014 Nice chapter! Glad to see this story being updated again! Keep up the great writing! I wonder how that Dodgeball match will go. |
| reganisdefinitelyprobablyhuman chapter 3 . 10/6/2014 Ha I would like to that to my school! I suggest more descriptions. For example you could have explained the relief he felt when burning the work. |
| reganisdefinitelyprobablyhuman chapter 1 . 10/6/2014 I always like these types of stories to see what happens in the future with the characters but for future reference show don't tell. Having character descriptions is helpful tool for writing but it's even more creative to think of situations where this information will be shown instead of just laying it out on the table. I do like the character you made so far though. Ready to read more! |
| Paige chapter 6 . 9/21/2014 Awesome story |
| TheUnkownAuthor chapter 5 . 9/19/2014 I really like this chapter. I've been battling anxiety for a while, and suicide crossed my mind a bit as well a few years ago, but I personally agree with Simon. When in depression or anxiety, suicide crosses your mind, but I believe that it's not meant to stay like this for eternity, and that everyday is a gift, that's why they call it the present. It's a gift not meant to be ruined. You did a good job of creating a back story for Simon and Toby. For some reason, I have some predictions as to what might happen with Toby. If you'd like to hear them, just PM me! Keep up the great writing! |
| celrock chapter 6 . 9/17/2014 I loved the chapter! Keep up the great writing! |
| Crocy98 chapter 5 . 9/6/2014 Interesting. Keep writing! :) |
| celrock chapter 5 . 9/6/2014 This is very sad, but a good chapter as always! Keep up the great writing! |
| Crocy98 chapter 4 . 9/2/2014 Keep up the great writing! Fairly interesting. :) |
| celrock chapter 4 . 9/1/2014 Nice chapter here! Don't know if I could swear to walk out of the house dressed in a pink tank top showing my belly and a black skirt with a leather jacket, but that's fashion for ya. Keep up the great writing though, enjoying this story! |
| celrock chapter 3 . 8/30/2014 Good chapter here! I don't think I could have ever burned all of my old tests, notes, and quizzes, but that's probably because I had more or less, straight A's throughout most of middle school. Anyway, keep up the great writing! Loving this story! |
| Crocy98 chapter 3 . 8/30/2014 Great, like to see where this goes. Keep up the great writing! :) |
| FallenAngelJace chapter 2 . 8/30/2014 Thank You for the great review so far (even if there has only been four of you) |
| Crocy98 chapter 2 . 8/30/2014 Interesting, hope to see a continuation of this! |
| celrock chapter 2 . 8/29/2014 Interesting start to this story! Keep going! |
