Love it

Best bethyl fanfic ive ever read!

This is beautiful, sweet and hot. I love "naughty" Daryl.

I really like this story. I wish you would continue it!

Beautiful please continue

Wow! I loved this!
Congrats!

Loved it now for part 2

Hi there!

I know this is an M-rated story and there's supposed to be a lot of sex in each chapter, but you managed to do something that not many writers succeed in doing - something that makes you unique. You managed to put meaning into your story. You don't just make Daryl and Beth 'fuck', you make them love each other in a very special way.

I write stories too here on Fanfiction, but I decided to stay anonymous, because I don't want you to feel like I'm only saying this so you would read my stories or follow me or whatever. I want you to know I'm saying this because I want to say it and it needs to be said.

You're a great writer and I enjoy reading this fic, not only for the smutty reasons, but also because I envy the fact you can make the intercourse beautiful, something I and many other writers can't do. I don't know if it's because you've lived in a situation like this (not the zombie-part, of course, but the broken-man, healing-woman thingy) or because you're just that amazing.

I hope you keep writing and above all, I hope you widen your horizon and you find a subject that really interests you, so you can use your gift to put words to paper. I hope that, one day your words will make a difference.

I wish you get everything in life that you ever want, because I think you'll make the world a better place if you keep writing.

I read all of it! Please make more!

This was a really good story! Such a mature one to, please keep writing!

That was a lot, but it was good. A little confusing though.

Libby Putney GO THE FUCK AWAY YOUR WORTHLESS FUCKING WHORE

Libby Putney - who made you the guardian of morals here? The story warns of "explicit content", so why did you read it? This is just normal sex between a man and woman. It's not violence, rape or perversion. Maybe you should try some sex yourself and you won't be so prissy and judgemental and spend so much time sniffing out this naughty S*X. Get a life. Or get laid.

This was beautiful,

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