Wah holy shit this was awesome! I love it! Whoo!

Wow... that was. Just. Hot as hell :)

So I must say I was super pleased with what you have written here, I feel like you characterized Trip, Virus, and Aoba really well. Virus was the right amount of submissive yet stubborn and I must confess I really like the racier things that these two are into, I feel like I really like the fluff a lot too.

That being said I really enjoyed the way you incorporated both fluff and sadism/masochism in this.

Excellent job! :)

Next part soon please! That was intense! in a good way :)

Ahh, I loved this so much. I really love the plot, what with Trip loving Virus and Desire coming into play, and your writing is quite good as well! It'd be lovely to read more about this trio... *drops not-so-subtle hint*

Great job! :)

Oh, my, i just love this, please write more, make this a twoshot or something, i just need more of my favorite treesome and i'm in love with your way to write 3