Amazing.

Excellent! Well-written.

Well done on describing the dental processes. It's weird to be so interested in that, but as someone who's spent a considerable amount of life with my own "dental team" I appreciate the truth of it all.

Very well done look at what was going on 'in between'. (Altho', given the real life scandals surrounding VA medical centers, I want to believe that Hetty has access to non-VA treatment for her people so they will heal quickly and well.) Keep up the good work!

This is a wonderful examination of Kensi and her thinking. If only those two could learn to communicate.

Love, love, love this. It was so intense and very real. I agree about the line about wby the mouth was targeted. It made such sense and something I had not thought about.

great job. Is this a one shot or should we be looking for more? It isn't marked complete but could easily end here or go on either one. Anyway, very nice story. Thanks for doing it.

Loved how you wrote Kensi - how conflicted she was about what she had to do, how confused she was about her feelings and his feelings. There really was so much that should have gone in between scenes on the show, and you write conflict beautifully.

Wow. Wow. Wow. Absolutely fantastic. I can't even put into words how perfectly you wrote Kensi's point of view in reaction to The Incident. Great job!

I read this last night in bed, and it has stuck with me and haunted me all day today. Excellent, just...damn good.

Great job! Wow...

omg so awesome!

Amazing! I love how you portrayed Kensi's thoughts and feelings. Well done :)

I read the first bits of this story on tumblr and I was hooked. Such a nice surprise to find it entirely over here.
It was a very emotional trip; you guided us through Kensi's mind in such a scary way that I had to cringe a couple of times. And Julia's description of the motives of such a brutal form of torture was perfect in its horrible way.
Thanks for sharing this story with us.

Such a sensitive exploration of emotions. Your descriptions were flawless, and the sadness so true and moving. Julia talking about why someone would torture in that way was eye opening and so brutal and invasive and I understood. This was a dark journey, but it was so expressive and heartrending, yet you left us with that hopeful line...it's a love story.