I love it can someone make this into manga reboot!

Can someone make this into manga alternative?

Must have more asap. love it so far, keep it up. can't wait to see what happens next.

love it

What did I fucking say!?
You know I was also going to suggest making another orgy chapter where the girls suddenly grow dicks and start fucking Tatsumi in the ass, since I think it would something that you would do.
But I guess it was all a dream. I would say Tatsumi cheated on Mine, but honestly no one is better than anyone in this clusterfuck anymore, so whatever.

Now I will admit, this was to some extent funny.
The one part where Mine thinks to herself that one quote.

However thank you for the bad mental image of Esdeath having her vagina pierced so hard that it had to come out of her mouth. It's turning my stomach just thinking about it.

Anyway, you know I'm gonna forget last chapter happened. I'm gonna pretend they made up some other way, no offence.

What is this?
I can't believe this fic almost innocently started of just having Tatsumi and Mine and whatever the fuck you were trying to imply with Lub and Najenda being in a relationship. It almost felt wholesome, beside the few times they bumbed uglies. Which was okay and within range of my understanding considering the circumstances.

But as of now you quite definitely blown that out of the water as you let Esdeath rape every other girl into submission until they became best of friends like nothing ever happened between them.
I mean this has to be some sort of joke, if you letting me to believe that after Esdeath's horrible deeds to the same girls, after she mutilated them you thought letting her molest girls is a best way to bond. You literally forgot who you're dealing with.

The way I understand, you tried to resolve the hostility between Esdeath and the crew so that they woundn't have to fight during the war and I quite understand that.
But, I'm sure there should've been a better way of resolving this. Granted, I don't have any clue as to how to do that myself since I can't even imagine them working together at this point since canon material never really showed us that with how war hungry Esdeath really is. Clearly you had smut in your mind and decided that them fucking was the best solution.
Which is why I'm disappointed. I honestly didn't want to read this because of porn but because you had an interesting premise about the Tatsumi and his Imperial Arms and its method of evolution. I mean you really threw me of when you showed the first Mine and Tatsumi had sex.
This chapter was just ridiculous in terms of progression and the worst part is of how OOC you made the girls to be. I guess you did explain that they are not themselves or some shit thanks to the Tyrant but it was still bending some rules and I didn't like that. Anyway, I guess this turned into a harem to my dislike.
Won't be surprised if you're gonna cuck Mine again with Esdeath raping the real Tatsumi.
And here I thought having the Tyrant multiply into few different Tatsumis and then fucking their user was weird enough.

Don't remember the last time I read someone going so mad and insane. I mean, did you really have to go and include a pregnant woman into that demented killing spree?

I can't even believe you made me feel more pity for Esdeath now than for Kurome.

Really hope this time, she dies. With an excruciating suffering.

Also, with how gruesome and erotic this fanfic can be, I fear for Mine if she ever gets close to the enemy.

Okay, did not expect a smut.
But goddamn those grammar errors are getting on my nerves.
Imagine if I talking like this, it's not very compel, is it?
Oh well, you can't fix them, so there's no point in saying this again.

Really awesome and epic start. I never realized I wanted this so bad. Tatsumi being OP was just a pleasure to read.
That being said, imagining Kurome and Esdeath in fear was hard, because they are so cocky all the time.
Really wished you could've killed Kurome to make up Chelsea's gruesome death. But maybe, it will come.

The only problems I have with fic, are the grammatical errors and weird sentences. I kept noticing that you didn't use the right tense for some words.
And plot wise, Tatsumi should've had some repercussions for overusing Incursio. I don't think you knew at the time, but by evolving he was gradually becoming one with the Tyrant.

But I get your reasoning nevertheless, and you make it sound like Incursio is the second most strongest Imperial Arms.
Can't imagine where this goes next as Mine won't be in a coma. Probably.

Eh, didn't really bother me too much, was a bit too over the top. Like Mortal Kombat.

Good chapter, waiting for update.

Yeah let's just make some op bad guys like esdeath isn't really strong enough. Took away the point of making tatsumi op. I'll quit here.

You lied to me...

another brilliant and enjoyable chapter

nice chapter