cool can't wait to read more

very interesting

I really think you got the essence of Hermione. I like how you portrayed her parents, not to mention her. Update!

This is fantastic! I noticed you haven't updated in a while... please do!

This first chapter is great! On to the next one...

This is a really interesting take on this. Not many authors try to approach Hermoines early years from a scientific view. Usually it's the angsty lonely smart girl who does odd things. There are good ones that way but I think your version seems more in line with the Heroine we first meet.

This looks interesting. I hope you are going to keep going.