Love it

It is a little difficult to hang at the beginning but everything returns very quickly in the order thereafter!
Nice story! ;9 (Actually I alrealdy read it 3 times since 2016..!)

I've just started to read this story and I have been crying every chapter

Wut is going on...?

I just gotta write a review. I read this story when I first got on Fanfiction, and back then I didn't really write reviews, wasn't into it. But once I began writing my own stories I realized how much I liked reviews, so now I review for every story I read-and like. So, here's my review for this one. I loved this story, and have re-read it a few times already. I love tragedies, because that's me, and that's just what I do. So, thank you for writing this story, and finishing it. It was a great one. Something I needed you to know. But, I'll be leaving it. My pack and I are moving on to read other stories, and occasionally maybe this one again. Come, my pack, let's go!

This is so captivating, I love how you write!

I dont like this story. It was well written, and an emotional rollercoaster of a ride. It made me cry. Im sitting here at the end of it, tears rolling down my face, happy for Natsu and Lucy, but seriously upset because of this story. You are a brilliant author. But please in the future, write happy things, I dont think I can take another of your brilliantly written tradgedy pieces, and I plan on reading everything you post...

Love it but errrrr Lucy has brown eyes. Not blue

10/10 one of the best FF's I've read lol Well done! :D

YAY! LOL!
I loved Natu's misunderstanding of Happy and Lucy's conversation. Very Funny.

I thought that was kinda funny and weird how he was in a towel the whole time he was jumping up from his couch and running to pull Lucy back in, and his towel never loosened or fell while he was hugging her...
Would've been totally awkward... LOL

You're like Dr. Jekyll/Mr. Hyde through this story. Through 95% of it you were Mr. Hyde. But the later the story went and with all the cheery happy festivities going on and influencing you, you were, like you said, a "good girl", Dr. Jekyll... Or should it be Dr. Hejmdal?
...HAHA... Dr. Hejmdal/ Mrs. Diabloki.
(Diablo and Loki fused themselves together as The Villain's last hope of finally ridding themselves of the Evil Empress Hejmdal... Their newly combined powers were not intimidating in anyway to the Empress, they were... Enticing, Alluring, Powerful... Yummy...
As they raised their united fist to release a deathly blow, the Empress simply raised her pinky finger and poked them on the forhead, stunning them. With swift, cat-like movements, the Empress closed in on her frozen prey and delivered a sinister farewell kiss before devouring their delectable new powers and adding them to her own. The Villains' newfound hope fell just as quickly as they watched their "Heroes" drop to the ground. The villains all dropped to their knees, praising and worshipping their almighty ruler, Hejmdal. The empress sent all villains through a week-long torture program, as punishment for even coming up with the very thought of trying to get rid of her and her evilness.
And as for Diabloki, The empress is having a most wonderful time "Playing" with them... Like torturing 2 exes in 1 body... Ah... Pure Bliss...)

HAHAHA! I have NO idea where that came from. I just started typing and then a funny evil story was the result.
HAHA! Oh my gosh, That was like my own "Hejmdal Fan-Fiction One-Shot"! XD

Great Ending to an Amazing Story.
Absolutely LOVED reviewing your story and talking to you! So much fun!

Can't wait to see what else you can come up with.

THAT WAS FUCKIN BEAUTIFUL! AND YES YOU KNOW IM SO EXCITED FOR SOME NEW NALU STORIES!

This story was a rollercoaster, making me feel sad and joy at times. (Im a sick son of a bitch XD) I really enjoyed vunerable Natsu! We never really get stories like that of him. Plus hes one of the most interesting and sexiest characters in Fairy Tail, he always has me intrigued.

Again Thank you for writing this beautiful story! Honestly Ill peobably never find a story good as this one unless its writren by you. Lol Cant wait for the next story!

Really cool chapter!

I loved how you wrote when Natsu got furious and crazy attacking all the trees in the forest.
Good wording, good visuals...
Loved the message the old man gave Natsu. That was a really good one!

Happy's teasing was super funny! Especially the snot one!

That shadow thing dripping off the girl was creepy.
You did very well with the gross zombie like description of the monster girl. Very Eww...

I can understand why Natsu wasn't exactly satisfied with the events at the cave while everyone else was there. But... Maybe Lucy will help him out in that area. :)

I loved in the author's note how you threatened Natsu with another torturer...
Stephanie Kreuger King, Empress of the Underworld, and Evil Incarnate Herself...
You're just itching to get Natsu off by himself again and put him through the same methods of torture you perfomed on Diablo, aren't you?
...Naughty...

You're evil impulses almost blinded my brain! (...ugh...Gajeel...eww...)
AND almost mauled my body to the point of no return with those sweet/sour Natsu Chibis you threw to me!
(You caught me off guard cause you knew how much I love chibis... Especially Natsu chibis...)
I know EXACTLY how Gildarts felt on Tenrou! Poor Guy!
I've got my guard up and my eyes on you...

Great chapter, awesome story, scary villain...
I'm definitely looking forward to your next installment of this immaculate piece of literature!
Keep up the awesome work you do best!

(P.S. I loved when Natsu said Lucy was adorable & Shadow Gal said she understood why Natsu liked her. Kawaii! Did you know Avril Lavigne has a song out called Hello Kitty? She speaks Japanese all through it... Oops! Got off track! Anyway, yeah, like I said, loved those parts! So ready for your new stuff! Can't wait!)

Whoaaaaaaaa. That was AWESOME!

Im so sad to see this go...BUT I AM EXCITED! Natsu is hopefully gonna be all good in the next chapter. It was a really great and amazing story. I would continue but im saving that for the last chapter!

Cant wait for the next story. *wink*

SNOW BALL! ** UPDATE! Natsu overcome your fear! And...*Jumps* FLY! *Falls* Damn...