It's a great story but could you maybe continue it. Like maybe in a sequel or something, to show how Videl gets back on her feet and she and Gohan getting together.

Next chapter: Hercule wakes up and faces the consequences of his actions head on (no booze, no drugs, no excuses and absolutely no lies) let him suffer the shame of his crime against god and humanity, but don’t kill him make his life a literal hell until he breaks down and begs god for death...honestly give him a fate worse than being in a coma or death, The sentence should be an eternal life of shame and sorrow.

Brilliant story! Excellently written

My only complaint of this story. Is that there is not a sequal! It was a great read!

J'aime bien que erasa ce dise que sans videl elle n'est rien, oui elle est jolie mais elle n'a été que l'ami de videl, et maintenant pour les autres elle l'est leur Complice.

J'aime que krillin ouvre un dojo .

Et entièrement d'accord avec Bulma, tous ce qu'elle dit est vrai.

J'adore sbrappner et erasa était bien content d'être ami avec elle .

Après c'est sûr que videl accentué l'image de son père.
Pour tous le monde elle le savait surtout que pour son comportement envers Gohan elle est trop suspicions n'

Now that was a GREAT story

Wait a minute if the dragon balls can't bring back people who use a suicide technique then how is Chioutsu alive? Obviously the namekian DBs work on those types of wishes so they can wish him back that way right?

I remember reading this a long time ago. Will re-read soon. Was one of my fav fics

Cute!~

Fun note: there is a game dragon ball online in which Krillin formed a new turtle school so...wow

I hope you’d do a sequel that covers the buu arc

This was an incredibly well written, thoroughly developed, epic fic. I’m fairly jealous of how easily you were able to pull me in with the tale you wove. Well done. Keep up the good work.

I loved that twist with Vegeta. I really really wish this had happened now. Thank you for writing this, I know it's one of my favorite fan fictions now. If only because this is so much better than the story I really really hated in canon...

Still, I love this so much better. I makes a lot of the anger I had to the series disappear. Thank you.

the is shouting the word "sequal" XD
awesome story