Wtf did I jus read!? B-)

You have to love a bold Hinata

ISSHH SHOOO GOOODDD

yes, just, yesssss

This is amazing and very hawt

Hey there!
I am not very good at leaving feedback, but still I wanted to try and leave you a comment, as quick and lame as it is" This has been the first fic I've read in this fandom and I've found it to be a pleasant reading, so I guess this is the least I can do to thank you.
I admit I have not that much to say though. The idea is kind of a classic (not that much regarding the "remedy", but the scenario of a public handjob certainly isn't anything new under the sun), but an always welcomed one and a nicely developed one too. As the trope per se entails, it was a bit unrealistic, for them not to be noticed in a bus full of people (all the more considering they're weren't even that sneaky about it in the first place) and this irked me a bit. It is sort of a forgivable thing as it is to be expected from these kind of scenarios, but I admit it still irritated me lol
Aside from this lil "flaw" (if it can be called that) I liked everything about this ficlet: the interactions were well described, not only the ones concerning hinata and kageyama (which I found to be extremely endearing) but the ones involving the rest of the team too; you writing style was neat and pleasant to read; the sexual tension was PERFECTLY built up and escalated just right along the fic; and their sexual interactions were simple but all the more realistic for this reason and they didn't fail to be enticing.
In a word, you did a pretty good job!
I also have no complains about the ending: I actually liked the fact that you just hinted at what followed after and didn't go on describing it (which I would have found redundant tbh). It also added a nice, ulterior maliciousness to the whole scene, somehow.

Aaaaand that was it! Once again, sorry for the lame comment" I hope it was welcomed even though it was kind of a useless one. And I also hope I didn't blabber too much and that everything I had to say was well explained.
Thank you for this fic! :)

Hey there!
I am not very good at leaving feedback, but still I wanted to try and leave you a comment, as quick and lame as it is" This has been the first fic I've read in this fandom and I've found it to be a pleasant reading, so I guess this is the least I can do to thank you.
I admit I have not that much to say though. The idea is kind of a classic (not that much regarding the "remedy", but the scenario of a public handjob certainly isn't anything new under the sun), but an always welcomed one and a nicely developed one too. As the trope per se entails, it was a bit unrealistic, for them not to be noticed in a bus full of people (all the more considering they're weren't even that sneaky about it in the first place) and this irked me a bit. It is sort of a forgivable thing as it is to be expected from these kind of scenarios, but I admit it still irritated me lol
Aside from this lil "flaw" (if it can be called that) I liked everything about this ficlet: the interactions were well described, not only the ones concerning hinata and kageyama (which I found to be extremely endearing) but the ones involving the rest of the team too; you writing style was neat and pleasant to read; the sexual tension was PERFECTLY built up and escalated just right along the fic; and their sexual interactions were simple but all the more realistic for this reason and they didn't fail to be enticing.
In a word, you did a pretty good job!
I also have no complains about the ending: I actually liked the fact that you just hinted at what followed after and didn't go on describing it (which I would have found redundant tbh). It also added a nice, ulterior maliciousness to the whole scene, somehow.

Aaaaand that was it! Once again, sorry for the lame comment" I hope it was welcomed even though it was kind of a useless one. And I also hope I didn't blabber too much and that everything I had to say was well explained.
Thank you for this fic! :)

Ps: sorry, I may have accidentally posted this review as an anonymous user, because I forgot to log in first"

I'll go with the second option

Wow! i like this ;)
Maybe more belly kink next time, writing is a great talent to have u (which i dont currently hold)
Bloating is a good belly kink, belly rubs is best too :O

*pictures aforementioned orgy in a fit of fangirliness*

Ive been dieing to read a story about the two of them ever since i started the show and i finished it to so this was grate.

Omg I loved this so much! Thank you for writing this!