Hi there i was reading the fanfic story and i love it so much i really want to know what happens at the very end. Please never lose the story writing will.

hiya i have fallen in love with this fic i love the folklore behind it with blake and yang being guardians in the chinese culture i love the Asian culture themes looking forward to find out what happens next. fantastic story keep it up w

This story give me life slabslbdlfbfoaksjdlmd

I loved this story! Hope you continue soon! 3

Well after that comment, I'd be hard pressed if I didn't actually comment. I remember coming across this story when it first came out. Honestly, I don't even think I had a profile back then to favorite (or in the case of AO3 Bookmarking). I remember just keeping it tabbed for the longest time waiting for an update. Eventually, it got around to me making an account so I didn't need to keep stories tabbed. So this fanfiction, while short at the time, was one of my favorites rwby au fanfics I've ever read. I can't really complain about long waits in between chapters cause I'm the same. I take a long time to write things. Back then though I wasn't even a writer. But fanfics like this one made me start wanting to be. Even if it was just fanfiction I found a way to contribute to a community I love. So, that being said, thanks for the story and I'll keep an eye out for you on archive.

It seems to have a very eastern (chinese)feel to it. I like it, fine writing. Don't give up yet.

Very well done, that cliffhanger *sobs* can't wait to see what happens next.

Glade to see you back! And yeah Ao3 does get more people in so I’ll be sure to go over there to read your stories:3

Yaaasss I’m super excited to see this story again! Please update as soon as you can!

Hello, I just wanna sat that this is one of my favorite BMBLB fics, including Bees of the Nile, I'm still waiting for an update. I'm sorry to hear that you've lost interest in writing. But just letting you know about that. Sorry I don't have much to say.

I can understand being discouraged by the lack of reviews, but never let something like that get you down. I've skipped a review or three because of a few reasons (or excuses) but that never meant I've enjoyed something less. Sometimes it's because the story is great as is and I really don't have anything else constructive to add. This time, however, I will. Your arc is coming to an end, Yang has defeated the villain. Now she faces something that could be just as painful. A great set up for the next chapter. Hopefully you find that little spark again to finish this out the best way: Straight from your heart and imagination.
See you next chapter.

Naww i know what ya mean they do not some tinmes and it hurts. Though you gotta be patient. I just rewrote my "A Fireworkd Heart" wich had 5 coments on it before asking for more. I just put up my rwrite for my Digimon story which had maybe 15 all complimenting except one now only has three. I will keep pushing on cause i want these stories wrote. If i get no reviews fine i will still write. Its hard to see nothing and it makes you think your work is not appreciated. But, it is and no amount of reviews is gonna change it either story and all the ones you wrote i have read have touched me deeply and i love them. I just wanted to say i understand and that sometimes you gotta hang tough but i feel ya. Ever feel like chatting or telling me off my PM is open

Blake get up my g i need you so does yang

I would love to see this finished.

That's a pretty good sword to cut through a whole limb of a Dragon like that. I'm jealous