Amazing story with terrific writing style. A great and entertaining story. I hate to see such talent not continue but I don’t regret the enjoyment I was able to experience.

Fantastic story couldn't put it down. I wonder why you stopped writing it.

Man... awesome story, please continue it, find the time, even few minutes a day and juat TRY. It is the best written farscape story i found... pls just try and dont give up on it.

Story just keeps getting better and better.

That Scorpy needs a while between the eyes.

Great story. Sorry I forget to answer to each chapter. Too engrossed in the story.

What an evil place to leave us hanging, I really hope you continue this story some time in the future. This has been an absolutely awesome story so far watching Crichton as a Peacekeeper and not just rising the ranks but also winning/earning the respect of some of his fellow Peacekeepers (a list that continues to grow starting with the Techs and now the Pilots and even other ranking officers in the same Command).

I'm guessing instead of Einstein it's the Ancient that goes by the name Jack, that has pulled John in for a chat.

I really want to see this continued as Crichton continues to advance in position and rank. Not to mention as the confrontation with the Scarrans worsens. Also to see how John and Aeryn's relationship continues to grow (hopefully this is one area this story will follow the series and Aeryn will survive).

Later.

I just started reading FarScape fanfic. I really love what you have so far. Please update soon.

Such a fantastic story I hope you write more like this.

This story has me mesmerized. I'm so excited to get to the next chapter I forget to review.

I first encountered this story years ago, maybe a decade, on Leviathan, and later here and after the deal-breaker chapter forgot about it, until I rediscovered it by pure coincidence.

I truly loved this story, it's the biggest ep for John/Gilina there is (and sadly there is way too little of that relationship out there)... up to the point where Gilina dies. Yes, it's a magnificent work of fiction and imagination, but John/Gilina was that something that gave me interest in the story, second being the plot of John slowly becoming a PK. With Gilina (and their baby and relationship) dead I no longer see the attraction or the point to reading this story. I wish it had gone differently, but thank you for the pleasant times before the ugly happened (though YOU COULD'VE avoided that ugly in the first place without sacrificing the story).

Several years after your last posting, just want to you know how fantastic your re-imagining and varied integration of multiple eps and storylines are! I have thoroughly enjoyed this realized unreality of yours and will be searching to see if there is more of this tale or other works out there! Congrats on a truly creative (although too cut off!) retelling of this incredible universe!

Right. I caught up. You can start posting more now.

I enjoyed the original ending more. It was far more poingent and powerful for the whole idea to come from Chriton himself. More so now after everything that has happened thus far.

Wow - what a great fic. I know it's been 5 years, but this is just too good to leave unwritten. I genuinely hope you come back and write this some day. You've got new characters done well, the characterization and plot of the original characters is excellent. I wonder if you were a writer from the show. You took an excellent idea and went really far with it.