wow

what the fuck

Damn, this is one of the most vulgar MLP stories I've read recently. I like it. You have missed some spelling and your grammar in some places could be fixed, but other than that it's good.

please make more

Dark Twilight is probably my favorite type of mlp fic.

oye continuaras esta historia, me gusto mucho, espero el siguiente con ansias
nos leemos luego adiós XD

I absolutely love it! This fic is so hot! I can't wait for the next chapter! :)

These are some strange fetishes here, and writing is mmmmmmm just someting hey look i post this make pefect cents pls now i telll story to you with much raeps an secks m8 ok here goes:

Onece upon a tiem, in the magukle lan of eskwestrua, their was a pretty bitch princess nown asz xXx_Celestia_xXx. Her disiplez an shit wurshiped her until one daey her pnk ass mutherfuker sister castrated the hole lot. So after the blood and gore and spooky shit was used az a lueb two penetrait orfanz and pleezet taexpayerz an the sun and moon and stars were once agian reunited in haromonie and friend ship and shit. The end. Plz one like equlz one pray .

Thank you for sharing. Please do update I really love this. Also is there any chance this have a Twilight/FemHarem. And can you make Luna as Twiligh's willing slave and not have her mind broken. Im really looking forward to the next installment.

Wow this was very exciting, twilight a dominatrix ah..great idea, and her beign sombras daughter was even better