Please still be alive. You can't keep us hanging like this :-(

Honestly a really cool story. It gets frustrating reading sometimes cause no one communicates for no reason at all but the overall story is really authentic and has some good twists.

I decided that since this work is unfinished, I would summarize an epilogue because I feel like it can’t end like this.

Thalia goes to court against Luke even though Annabeth isn’t happy with that, but she understands. Thalia turns 18 and gets out of her mother’s house, and decides to go to college and become a social worker so she can help people like her. She ends up living in Michigan, and often visits Percy and Annabeth.

Percy and Annabeth get closer and closer and kiss, and then Annabeth hears about Percys relationship with Calypso. Annabeth is heartbroken, because they said they would wait for eachother and Percy protests and eventually after a little while they make out, frustrated and full of lust. After confessing that they’ve loved eachother their whole lives, Percy proposes to Annabeth and they end up having a bunch of kids. Percy and Annabeth stay in New York and grow old together. Their parents are very happy and die peacefully at 90 and 93.

At Percy and Annabeths wedding, Leo, Nico’s friend bumps into Calypso, and they end up getting married as well. They have a shit load of kids but are super happy together and live in Vermont where Leo runs a car fixing company and Calypso is in marketing. They always make enough time for their kids.

All of their kids grow up together and end up living wonderful lives. Annabeth is happy to be alive. Percy is finally at home with his real family- Annabeth and his kids. Thalia is at peace and is moving on with her life. Posidon has a good relationship with Percy, but percys relationship with Athena and Fredrick never wavers.

When Percy and Annabeth realize they are on their deathbed, they are happy with everything they’ve done with their lives. They are ready to finally be dead for real.

After a long happy life, even with some ups and downs they know that they have spent it with their true soulmate. Someone perfect for them.

I hope you enjoyed my epilogue- I just couldn’t stand it ending like that because I’m way too invested in the characters :)

I don't usually cry at fanfics...

I really like the relationship between Thalia and Annabeth.

Eerrr is i PErCA

I know it’s been a while, but please could you try and update it? I’m Honestly so drawn in and I don’t have the imagination to create a happy ending for them myself and this is. Such a good one Please...

God cares.

GAH! WHAT THE-HOW DID YOU JUST END THIS WHAT...Okay, wow. You must be in college now. You probably have no intention of returning to finish this because some random guest rambles a lot in her reviews two years later. Actually, by now, you're probably an accomplished author. You have almost 800 reviews, you should've heard how amazing this is. If you made this into an original, I would buy a bazillion copies, okay? Even though you didn't finish the last FIVE chapters for this, so technically you probably wouldn't do that. But seriously, I love your writing. You have incredible plot development and beautiful characters. I want you to know that you should have so much confidence in yourself, in your heart and your creativity, to write something so wonderful. Writing is an incredible skill, and even if you decide to not continue, that fact that you honed it so beautifully while enduring school and attempting to write a novel is amazing. Really, so amazing. Thank you for putting this out there. I will do my best to learn from your wisdom here.

Can u PLEASE update soon please please please

Okay, hi, I know this is like two years since you've completed this, and I'm clearly a slow reader, but I just found this is someone else's favorite stories page and so yeah. Listen. I know you probably hear this a lot, since you clearly have a lot of reviews, but you're really good at writing. It's been two years, you must be impossibly great by now. I don't understand what books you must be reading if you think you don't compare to them. Seriously. If you stick to this and don't give up, you will be a New York Times bestselling author. I say this will absolute sincerity. You will not have a struggle making money with this, unless you find a stupid editior.
I'm actually kind of like you. (Well, the you you're describing here. Which is probably not the real you.) I find almost all of my joy in writing. Humanities, I'm alright at, but science and math? Ugh. The world wasn't designed for discovering talent and helping you hone it. It's a horrible struggle, but all we can do is bear through it. One day, we'll be in a place where we can do what we want, and for now, we might as well do our best. You're great at writing, so you should never give that up. If you lose your passion, and you probably will once or twice, fight to get it back. It's probably the most incredible thing you can do if it makes you happy. And it will come back, again and again.
So don't do it just because you get reviews and love and encouragement. Write because you like it, because you like what you write. Honestly, just quit stories if you hate it. As a reader, I'd prefer knowing you're working on something better for you. And if you like the community and encouragement, don't resort yourself to something small. Join physical writing groups, or digital ones. is a pretty great community.
And as for your class, all I can say is you're lucky to have a class to write in. And while your teacher does sound like of annoying, reading aloud your writing is so important because writing is meant to be shared. And for those jerks, they're really not worth your time. If they cannot understand how to provide basic constructive critisim, then they don't deserve to be in the same writing class as you! I would be ecstatic to take their spot, by the way.
Anyway, sorry for the long rant. I just find it horribly unfortunate that someone like you could doubt themselves. I'm also an author, btw, just don't go reading my work: pride-and-loyalty. I would love to PM with you as I really hope for some writing advice.

Really great story! I love it but is that it?

it was good

update or i will kill your puppy

omg pls update soon