My thoughts on this fight was”Winchester pinball!”

So much funny and epic in the same place! I love it!

cool

Can you make jaune's semblance one that turns him into a girl and he gets into some funny situations after he and Penny find a way to get back to Vale?
Also I love this fanfic please keep up the great work.
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XD I love this story!

Just to say, I don't think Neo can talk. She seems mute throughout the story. Also, earlier chapter you gave Cardin an axe. If memory serves he uses a mace with a dust gem at the center of the head. Think the gem allows explosions on contact when active.

I'm going to assume that you'll be explaining Jaune's need to shout the name of his attack out later on because, honestly, it's kinda seems childish when you look at it through the eyes of his peers (This isn't Fairy Tail, with that I go with the logic that they have so many attacks that they do so in order to remember them all and not accidentally mess one up/forget one and that it's normal for them), the fact that none of them ['them' being Pyrrha, since she's the only one that I think has seen it (Unless you include Ozpin and Glynda watching the video), though I imagine that'll change next chapter] have questioned it I can only assume is due to Pyrrha not wish to accidentally offend him.

I'm liking this so far but you should probably change the way Crocea Mors talks to Jaune. It's hard to separate 'her' talking to Jaune from the narration of the story. Since apostrophes are in use for thoughts, maybe use italics or bold for 'her' speech.

So, if Pyrrha is Earth, is Jaune Air, Ren water, and Nora Fire? I like how you add hidden history.

This is great, but I never expect for Neo to talk.

Please keep it up.

So, basically an original character named Jaune.

Dungeon Crawling!

ahahahaha an epic adventure

This is just like the Manhwa ID, I just realized that. there should be more crossovers like this.

please update and show a bit more arkos happening